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怎么写好雅思大作文开头段 万事开头难,很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态,大多情况下可能会胡乱写作,甚至抄题,这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳,导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此,快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下环球雅思将为考生们总结一下怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的两大要素,供考生们参考。 写好雅思大作文开头段要素一:现象句雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。E.g.1Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount ofE.g.2Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. 写好雅思大作文开头段总结——主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or sevenE.g.3In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——主被动之间的转换,以及同义替换:finish high school = graduate from high school所以,从上文中可以看出,一般来说,现象句会在最开始加上一个套句,并且加上地点和时间。雅思大作文开头段经典套句:1.It is true that......是真实的2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…3.It is quite common… …是常见的4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的地点:in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place时间:in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays写好雅思大作文开头段要素二:点到问题雅思大作文考题分成两种:report & argumentative。对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)E.g.4In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来,全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。E.g.5Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点,把造成这个现象的原因大致导出,与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。对于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion.; is it a positive or negative development?),这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点,所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。E.g.6Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.Do you agree or disagree?I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——改写题目+主动变被动:have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by直接表达自己的观点:I tend to agree thatE.g.7Some people feel that entertainers (e.g.film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid?I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid.This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——现象+观点E.g.8Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective?There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere.Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.总之,如果要写出一篇较好的雅思作文,环球托福建议考生们在雅思大作文开头段落的描写方面绝对要达到快速和准确这两个要求,把时间控制在5分钟之内,把字数把握在30-40个单词之间。以上就是本次环球雅思为大家搜集整理的怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的方法介绍和例题分析,希望能够帮助到大家,最后,环球雅思预祝各位考试顺利!

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托福作文十大关系代词替换一、And 并列关系(and)inaddition / and / similarly / likewise / aswellas / besides / furthermore / also / moreover / too/ notonly……but / even / besidesthis/that二、Sequence顺序 (then)出现的时候表示列举first/ initially / secondetc/ tobeginwith / then / next / earlier/later / followingthis/that / afterwards三、Consequence结果 (so)前面是后面的结果 / 也就是这些词后面就开始给出结论了。asaresult/ thus / so / therefore / consequently / itfollowsthat / thereby / eventually / tnthatcase / admittedly四、Contrast转折 (but)表对前面论述的转折 / 一般后面才是作者观点however / ontheotherhand / despite / inspiteof /though / although / but / onthecontrary/ yet / insteadof / rather / whereas / nonetheless / incontrast五、Certainty确定 (of course)强烈的确定 / 后面是作者的坚定论点obviously/ certainly / plainly / ofcourse / undoubtedly六、Condition条件/ 因为 (if )后面跟随着某种情况发生的前提或者是条件。if / unless / whether / providedthat / Given that / for / sothat / whether / depending on七、Time时间 (when )before/ since / as / until / meanwhile / atthemoment / when / whenever / assoonas / justas八、Summary总结 (in a word)作者的最后总结inconclusion/ insummary / lastly / finally / tosumup / toconclude / torecapitulate 重述 / inshort / in a word九、Example举例 (for example)forexample / forinstance / justas / inparticular / suchas / namely 也就是十、Reason原因 ( because)since / as / so / because(of) / dueto / owingto / thereasonwhy / inotherwords / leadsto / cause

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可以下载个学英语的软件复习一下

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通常作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面的内容:1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon。2)一些人的观点(some people’s opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排。3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。雅思大作文的总字数有最低的要求,即250字,这250字大家一定要合理的分配布局,第一段最好是写3-5句话就ok了,而且小编在这里提醒大家,雅思写作好的开头千万不要在首段就把所有的话都说完。雅思写作好的开头方式通常有一下几种情况:1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做:主动语态<=>被动语态主谓宾<=>主系表某些近义词互换Example:At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practicalcourses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下我们有2种开首方式来保证字数,这也是比较好的雅思写作好的开头。把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。Example:International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比。Example:International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentumand has become a big industry. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息。这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。Example:The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?→In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。除此之外,考生在雅思写作首段的时候千万不要范语法和拼写等低级错误,这会给阅卷老师留下很糟糕的印象,同时也会影响阅卷老师对文章内容的理解。

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1、雅思小作文趋势类词汇

上升动词类:increase, go up, rise up, grow up, jump up, surge, shoot up, keep an upward tendency.

下降动词类:decrease, go down, decline, fall down, drop, sink, dip, keep a downward tendency

波动动词类:fluctuate

持平动词类:remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant

上升名词类:increase, rise, growth, jump, surge

下降名词类:decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop

波动名词类:fluctuation

修饰名词的形容词:slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic, drastic

2、雅思极值类词汇和表达

高点:reach the peak/top/highest point

Increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)

低点:reach the bottom/lowest point

drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)

3、雅思倍数的表达方式

Double是两倍/大一倍

Increase/decrease three times增长/减少了三倍

常用雅思小作文词汇 ! 许多考生在雅思写作准备上花费了时间和精力,并发现准备考试的效果并不明显。如果你准备雅思写作论文,那么小编将为你带来一个普通的雅思作文词汇,供大家学习。

4、开头段转述题目常用句型

The line graph describes/ illustrates/ demonstrates/ summarizes/ outlines/ shows…后面跟名词或者从句 开头段或者主体段引出数据或者趋势常用句型

According to/ As shown in/ As can be seen from…后面跟图表的类型

It can be seen from…后面跟图表的类型…

that It is manifest from…后面跟图表的类型…that表示上升的动词

Go up(went up) /rise(rose)/ grow(grew)/ increase(increased)/ ascend(ascended) ,其中rise和increase也经常作名词, grow-growth表示急剧上升的动词

Jump(jumped)/ surge(surged)/shoot up (shot up)/ soar(soared)其中surge也可以做名词

表示下降的动词Decline/ fall/ drop/ sink/ dip/ decrease/ descend,其中decline/ fall/ drop/ decrease也经常做名词

表示急剧下降的动词Plummet/ plunge

表示速度快的形容词Sharp/ dramatic/ drastic/ rapid/precipitous/steep副词加-ly

表示幅度大的形容词Marked/ substantial / significant,副词加-ly

表示缓慢,逐渐的形容词Gradual/ steady/ gentle / slow,副词加-ly

表示小幅度的形容词Modest/ moderate/ slight,副词加-ly

表示波动的动词Fluctuate,不及物动词,名词fluctuation

表示稳定在一个水平上的动词Level off at/ level out at/ hover at/ stabilize at/ reached a plateau at

表示达到高的动词Peak at/ reach the highest point at , peak也可以做名词

表示达到低的动词Reach the bottom at/ the lowest point at/ bottom out at, bottom也可以做名词

表示经历了某种变化的及物动词Experience/ witness/ see

表示达到了多少数量的及物动词或词组Reach/arrive at/ amount to / hit/ register/ stand at

表示占…(后面跟百分数或数字)的及物动词或词组Account for/ represent / constitute / make up

表示数据由某几个部分组成的既无动词或者词组A is composed of/comprise/ is made up of/ consists of B,C and D.注意和include区别

表示对未来数字的预测的及物动词Project/ predict / forecast

表示"分别"的副词Respectively—in the 2004 Olympics, China and Russia won X and Y gold medals respectively

表示"大约"的副词或者词组About, around, approximately, roughly, just over, just under

常用雅思小作文词汇有哪些?小编就说到这里了,更多关于雅思考试的报名入口,报名时间,成绩查询,报名费用,准考证打印入口及时间等问题,小编会及时更新。希望各位考生都能进入自己的理想院校。

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t苹果多多t

一、常用名词: 图表:chart graph diagram 数据:data statistics figure 比例:Rate percentage proportion ratio 特点:feature character 趋势:trend tendency 人群:cohort group The former group/the latter cohort/the figures the 16 to 26 age group the 16 to 26 cohort people between the ages of 16 to 26 the 16 to 26 age category 种类:category kind 二、常用动词: 展示、显示:describe show reflect indicate illustrate depict suggest represent 增长:increase grow rise enhance broaden go up Showed an increase=picked up 下降:decrease drop fall reduce lessen cut down Showed a decline/dropped/saw a decline 三、常用形容词: 重大的:significant great dramatic considerable substantial 明显的: noticeable remarkable 急剧的:rapid sharp steep abrupt突然的, sudden 轻微的:little slight slow light 大概的:general moderate

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婕哥大王

一、大作文的区别雅思大作文和托福大作文都是以议论文为主,雅思写作满分为9分,要求在40分钟之内写出250字以上的作文,托福写作满分为30分,要求在30分钟之内写出300字以上的作文。两者的区别主要体现在以下四个方面:1. 评分标准从评分标准来看,雅思大作文和托福大作文都要求主旨扣题、论证充分、结构严谨,但是两者对语言要求的严格程度不一样。在雅思大作文的评分标准中,对语言质量的要求占了一半比重。四项评分标准中,有两项分别考查的是词汇和语法,评分标准十分严格,中国考生的分数普遍偏低,7分以上的高分很少,而且几乎没有满分。而在托福大作文的四项评分标准中,只有一项考查语言质量。这意味着,一篇主旨扣题、论证充分、逻辑性强的托福文章,即使语言不那么完美,甚至还有小错误,也可以得到理想的分数,比如27、28分。2. 话题类型雅思大作文和托福大作文的话题类似,常见的话题包括教育、科技、媒体、政府、环境、社会。但是总体而言,雅思话题偏重学术,托福话题偏重生活,像托福写作中常见的朋友、金钱、娱乐、成功等话题,在雅思写作中并不常见。因此考生在练笔时,要针对不同的话题进行相应的练笔,并积累相关的词汇和论据。托福题目(偏重生活):雅思题目(偏重学术):3.文章结构雅思大作文和托福大作文整体都由三部分组成,分别是introduction, body和conclusion,可以写成四段式或五段式。但是,雅思大作文通常采用双边论证,平衡写法,审题时要明确两个对立面,写作时两个对立面都要有相应的主体段,比如一段写正方,一段写反方,要客观辩证的看待问题, 否则会被认为写作偏题。而托福大作文通常采取一边倒,主体段全力支持正方,比如写三个主体段论述正方的原因或优势,对于反方几乎不提,否则会被认为观点不明、思路混乱。考生一定要注意两者论证角度的不同。4.论证方法雅思大作文和托福大作文都可以使用例证法来支持论点。但是,雅思不可以举个例,不能说for example,I …或者my friend…,正确的做法是举范例、说群体,比如young people,old people,teachers,students, parents,children等等。雅思举例要表述简洁,概括性强,不可以长篇大论。而托福最常用的论证方法就是例证,举例可以五花八门,可以是个例,也可以是范例,可以是自己的,也可以是他人的,可以是中国的,也可以是外国的,可以是当代的,也可以是历史的。而且举例要具体详尽,一个例子可以写几十字,甚至上百字。二、小作文的区别雅思与托福的小作文截然不同,几乎不具可比性。雅思小作文以图表题为主,要求在20分钟之内写出150字以上的作文,写作任务是对图表中的数据和信息进行描述、对比、概括和总结,主要考查单项写作技能。而托福小作文是个综合任务,考查读、听、写三种技能,要求在20分钟之内写出200字左右的作文,写作任务是总结陈述所听到的学术性话题的观点,并建立所听观点与所读观点之间的联系。

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