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要是.....If only I tried hard enough如果..IF..first answer is very good

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Haste Makes Waste The proverb "Haste makes waste" means that one may delay the time to complete one thing if he rushes to do it, because he may neglect something important in the process and has to do it again from the beginning. So one should do every step well. Take remembering English words for example, every student wants to enlarge his vocabulary. But this aim cannot be achieved in one or two days. You should stick to remem bering some words a day and revise the words every few days. In this way you can keep the words in your mind firmly. There is mo shortcut. If you want to stuff all the words into your brain and mot to revise them, you will remember nothing. So don't be hasty. Haste makes waste.2.Blowing Balloons Blowing balloons is an interesting game. You may have some ideas of it. It is of great value to your health, especially to those who are fat. People usually make an airless balloon halfairfilled, put it on the hand, then blow it hard. Shortly after it flies up, his partner blows it away towards the opposite party. And the opposite blows it back. Repeat doing so until the balloon drops onto the follr. Any party onto whose floor the balloon drops will be the loser. So any party who tries to control the balloon's direction and blows it with great efforts will make the balloon fly straight to the other party and will have more opportunities to 3.My favorite animals My favorite animals are swans.they are white.they can swim very well.I think they look like a beautiful girl in a white dress.they have a pair of wings and they can also fly well.I believe they are angles from the sky.they bring us love and make us happy.they are always friendly to us.We can’t hurt them,because they are our friend.I love them!I like dogs,too.they are not beautiful,but they are the best friends.they keep the thieves away.Dogs have the best listening and eyes.they can hear in the nosiy,see in the dark.If we are in danger,they will help us at once.And they don’t mind their lives.So,I love them 4.One thing I can’t forget I liked playing computer games,but my daddy was not happy because he thought it was not good for my study.Sometimes I felt I was not a free boy when my daddy was so strict with me,so I tried to talk to my daddy,and he said he was happy because I talked to him,and now he let me play games if I study well.From this,I understand a friendly talk can help people get along well.5. A letter to pen-firendsDear Andy lewis, hello.how have you been? i have read magazine advertisement knowing you are hunting for some people who can be your pen-friends firstly,please allow me to introduce myself.I am LiPing and i have a happy life with my parents in Shanghaimy father who is working for a big company is a legal adviser and my mother has retired. i am working for an advertising company as advertising design. My hobby is sports such as playing basketball,football,swimming and so on.i think that sports can not only lose your weight but also give you a good shape.i am fond of billiards other than that. As far as i know one of your hobby is learning foreign languages.i could teach you to learn chinese if you will. If only i could be accepted and be good friends with you. good luck to you.6.Pollution: a Social Problem When we read newspapers, we often come across the word pollution. This word was not familiar to the people some decades ago. But now, it is a serious threat to us because.it means the poisoning of the air, seas, rivers and lands, which would do harm to our health. There are many factories that bring pollution to us. We can not have fresh air in the morning. This is mainly because of the poisonous smoke coming from factories, especially chemical ones. In rivers, seas and oceans, there are industrial wastes. Some factories just throw their wastes into seas or let them flow into rivers. When people drink the water from such rivers, they get poisoned. Besides, there is rubbish from ships and when sometimes an accident occurs in an ocean, oil flows out from tankers. On land, the accumulation of rubbish in the streets may dirty the city and ruin our health. This is mainly due to the improper disposal of rubbish by people. If we do mot fight against pollution, surely one day all of us will be killed. Some people like to put the blame on the industrial revolutions. On the contrary, the pollution problem will be solved only with the help of modem science and technology.7.The Earth——Our Mother Pcople often say that the earth is like our mother. She gives life to all the living things on the earth and provides us with air, food, water and other essential things we need for living. Once she was beautifhl and rich, but now she becomes dirtier and dirtier, poorer and poorer. It is due to what we have done to her. Please have a good look at her: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wild life, and the depletion of the ozone layer… Can she bear to see her children putting the waste here and there? Can she bear too see her children cutting down the trees and destroying the grassland, to see the acid rain destroying everything? Can we bear to see our mother suffering so much? Isn' it time for us to ask ourselves whether this is the way to treat our mother? Floods, draughts, acid rain…,these are the punishments from nature. Everyone should know that there is only one earth, lfwe go on treating her like this, it won' t be fit for us to live in any longer. It' s time for us to love her, take good care of her and cure her. We should save the earth so as to save ourselves.8. My Dream Yesterday, we had a discussion. The topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor. My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. They took me there. I was saved. A good doctor can save people' s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.9.March 5th is my birthday.It's also a special day to memorize a great person -- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All o~ them hoped that I would be back again.What a joyful birthday it was!10.Most people has a sweet home,so have I.I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents. I can remember clear.Once I came back home late because my teacher didn’t want me leave until I finished my work.At that time,the weather became colder and the wind became stronger.I was so hungry and cold at that time!I felt I can’t take it any more,so I ran to my home quickly.When I got my home,I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before! That’s why I love my sweet home,Don’t you think so ?

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找个中文介绍,然后再在有道或百度上翻译啊!这个是百度上的翻译!原文:Peter Wyndham(Nicholls饰)与女友Emily(Jennifer Love Hewitt饰)像任何一对平凡的情侣一样,每天忙着自己的生活,很少时间独处。一次争吵过后,前来道歉的peter犹豫着要不要上出租车,因为这份犹豫女友选择离开。不到一分种,出租车在前面街口与一辆卡车相撞,女友香消玉陨。悲痛万分的peter在次日清晨醒来发现又回到了之前的一天,女友安然无恙,一切按照既定步骤发展。如果再来一次,Peter不敢想着居然成为事实。他放下一切业务,与女友登山、散步、彼此倾诉,爱意缠绵。到了那个决定性的夜晚,那辆夺命的出租车上,他毫不犹豫地上车,并且在致命的一击来到之时,俯身保护她。如果再来一次,他会用生命来爱她。译文:Peter Wyndham ( Nicholls) and his girlfriend, Emily ( Jennifer Love Hewitt) as a pair of ordinary lovers, busy day of your life, with little time alone. Once after the quarrel, to apologize for Peter hesitate to taxi, because this hesitation girlfriend choose to leave. Less than a minute, the taxi in front of block collided with a truck, his girlfriend Jade incense.The Peter grief in the morning woke up to find back the day before his girlfriend, safe and sound, all in accordance with the established procedures development. If once again, Peter 't thinking has become fact. He put down all business, and his girlfriend, mountaineering, walk, talk, love.By that decisive night, the killer taxi, he did not hesitate to get on the bus, and in a fatal blow came when, looking to protect her.If one more time, he will use the life to love her.

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hatishappiness-"caringonlyfortheirownpeoplewillturntheirownslaves."Ifonlyformyself,lifewillbeenarrow-minded,alway *** eenlimited."Humanneedforlove",toberespectedbyothers,firstofalltorespectotherpeoplefirst,whenyourightaroundanything,thenfulloflove,theworldwillbeeabetterhuman.Happinessisastateofmind,happinessisnotfromtheobject,itisnotathing.Happyisnotachase-youdonotneedtofirmlygraspit,becauseit'sinyourheart,youhavegotit.Butthisdoesnotmeanyoudonotneedtocontributetheirenergiestoit.Happylikeaparty,yousitdowntoenjoythefun-butonlyyouwantit,youarereadyforituntillightlyepreparedtoallowhimselfhappybar!Letthegoodplacebar!Ifyouarenothappy,thenthebesaytofindhappinessistoboostmorale,sothatactionsandwordsseemtohavefelthappylook.Makeyourfaceshowingahappy *** ilingfacetoupright,properlytookadeepbreath,andthensingashortsong;Ifyouareharmonically-challenged,onthewhistle;ifyoudonohistle,wesingaballad.Youwillsoondiscoverthatyousimplywillnotbeworriedanddecadencegoon.Ifwewanttodeveloppeacefulandhappystateofmind,pleaserememberthefollowingwords:"Withahappythoughtandaction,youcanbehappy."HappylivingcolumnistHarrisandfriendstobuyanewspaperonthenewsstand,friends,andpolitelysaidthankyoutothenewspapervendors,butthenewspapervendorshadlengkoucolds。

My name is Linlin.I am from China.I am fourteen years old.There are three people in my family.They are my father,my mother and I .We love our country .It has a long history.There are many beautiful places in our country ,such as the Great Wall,the summer palace and so on.They are all our prides.我叫林林,我来自中国.我十四岁,我家有三口人,他们是我爸爸,我妈妈和我.我们爱我们的国家,它有悠久的历史.我国有很多漂亮的地方如长城,颐和园等等.这些是我们的骄傲.。

No. 28 Middle School

Suzhou

April 8, 2001

Dear Mr Liu,

I'm a middle school student. In my spare time, I'd love to listen to the radio, especially the programme you present. When I am tired, I usually turn on my radio to relax. I enjoy the English songs in the programme most. From the songs, I learn new words. It is helpful in my study of English.

I was wondering whether you could help me find the words of the song My Heart Will Go On, as it is one of my favourites.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

来自优习英语网:mon human fears is scarcity. Many people are afraid of not having enough of what they need or want, and so they are always striving to get to a point when they would finally have enough. Alan and Linda always dreamed of living "the good life." Both from poor working-class families, they married young and set out to fulfill their mutual goal of being wealthy. They both worked very hard for years, amassing a *** all fortune, so they could move from their o-bedroom home to a palatial seven-bedroom home in the most upscale neighborhood. They focused their energies on accumulating all the things they believed signified abundance: membership in the local exclusive country club, luxury cars, designer clothing, and high-class society friends. No matter how much they accumulated, however, it never seemed to be enough. They were unable to erase the deep fear of scarcity both had acquired in childhood. They needed to learn the lesson of abundance. Then the stock market crashed in 1987, and Alan and Linda lost a considerable amount of money. A bizarre but costly lawsuit depleted another huge portion of their savings. One thing led to another, and they found themselves in a financial disaster. Assets needed to be sold, and eventually they lost the country club membership, the cars, and the house. It took several years and much hard work for Alan and Linda to land on their feet, and though they now live a life far from extravagant, they have taken stock of their lives and feel quite blessed. Only now, as they assess what they have left -- a solid, loving marriage, their health, a dependable ine, and good friends -- do they realize that true abundance es not from amassing, but rather from appreciating. Scarcity consciousness arises as a result of the "hole-in-the-soul syndrome." This is when we attempt to fill the gaps in our inner lives with things from the outside world. But like puzzle pieces, you can't fit something in where it does not naturally belong. No amount of external objects, affection, love, or attention can ever fill an inner void. We already have enough, so we should revel in our own interior abundance. 彼岸无尽头,知足才常乐 许多人都相信,一旦他们达到了自己所设定的某个特定目标,他们就会开心、快乐。

然而事实往往是,当你到达彼岸时,你还是不知足、不满意,而且又有了新的彼岸--新的幻想和憧憬。由于你总是疲于追逐一个又一个的彼岸,你从未真正欣赏、珍惜你已经拥有的一切。

不安于现状的欲望人皆有之,由来已久,但重要的是要对它保持清醒的头脑。一方面,你的生活因为梦想和渴望而更加精彩。

另一方面,这。

一、广泛地阅读课外书籍。

阅读是写作的基础。把别人的东西,变作自己的东西,把外部的语言内化成自己的语言,以后就能出口成章了。

每天花一定时间朗读课文,要有表情地朗读,好段落,精彩的语句要背出来、默出来。“读书百遍,其意自现”。

“熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟”,说的就是这个道理。 各种书都要读,要养成良好的读书习惯。

把好的章节、段落摘抄下来。要有目的、有计划地阅读中华经典美文。

二、选择恰当的写作材料写文章要选择恰当的材料,选择恰当的写作材料是习作的基础。(1)中心蕴含在具体的材料之中,材料是为表现中心服务的。

因此,选择材料必须紧紧围绕中心,服从中心的需要。(2)要选择真实的材料文章的材料应当真实可靠可信,合情合理。

我们平时习作,选择材料要选择自己熟悉的或比较了解的题材,最好是选择自己亲身经历的、耳闻目睹的有真实感的材料。只有这些真实可信的材料,才能表达出内心的真情实感,写出的文章才能有说服力,才能打动人,才能给人以启迪,才能引人入胜、引起共鸣。

(3)要选择典型的材料。选择典型的材料就是选择最有代表性、最能反映本质,最能说明问题的材料,选择那些最能突出人物思想品质和鲜明地反映事物精神面貌的材料。

(4)要选择新颖的材料。新颖的材料,指新鲜、活泼、独特,使人耳目一新,有感受有收获的材料。

因此,选材尽量选择那些别人没有写过或很少写过的材料。生活中不是缺少“新与美”,而是缺少发现。

因此,我们平时要耐心观察,注意在生活中去发现和寻找新颖的材料,只有这样,才能使文章更贴近生活,更具有时代气息,才能够达到寻美习作,以文炼人的目的。三、精心安排写作材料。

(1)并列法。即在表现文章中心是打断时间的连续和打乱空间的位置,围绕中心来连缀相关的生活片断或事件,按事情的性质选择几个相同或相似的材料,采用有详有略的方式并列地组织材料,从不同角度来表现中心。

(2)对比法。即用相互对立的,或用同一事物不同方面的材料进行比较,从而显示出人和事的真假、善恶、美丑,使人与事的形象鲜明,特征突出。

(3)递进法。即围绕一件事以事物本身发展的进程以及时间的推移为线索,层层递进,步步深入地安排材料。

这种方法是我们习作时常用的组材方法。(4)详略法。

即在表现一个中心时,对于几个类似的材料,有详有略地安排组织材料的方法。这种方法能使重点突出,主次分明。

组织作文材料,不论运用哪种方法,都要为表现中心服务,要切合不同文章的内容和体裁的需要,把材料合理地安排到文章中去。四、把文章写得具体生动。

具体生动是习作的基本要求之一,也是写好文章的关键所在。文章是以具体生动的形象来感染读者的。

(1)用总分法。(2)用比喻、排比等修辞手法把文章写得具体生动。

(3)用举例的方法把文章写得具体生动。(4)用描摹的方法把文章写得具体生动。

(5)用比较的方法把文章写得具体生动。(6)用数据说明的方法把文章写得具体生动。

除了前面所讲的方法外,为了使文章具体生动,我们还应注意多留心观察周围事物,只有观察细致,才能把观察的景物具体生动地表述出来。五、表达真情实感。

(1)选取自己感受最深的材料。在习作中,根据题目要求,选择那些感受最深的材料就容易表达真情实感。

(2)要用具体事物表达真情实感。没有具体事物,文章就没有真情实感。

而真情实感一般都是通过具体事物的叙述、描写、议论等表达出来的。(3)用词造句要准确、实在。

文章以情动人,这“情”指真情实感。要使文章的思想感情真实,用词造句就要较准确、实在,做到恰如其分。

六、写好文章开头和结尾。(1)写好开头 常言说:“良好的开端是成功的一半”,恰当、新颖的开头,不仅能使你笔下生花,而且能增加文采,吸引读者。

①交待四要素开头法。即开头简单交代时间、地占、人物和事件。

②开门见山开头法。即文章一开头不拐弯抹角,不兜圈子,而是把要描述的主要人、事或物直截了当地摆出来,引入正文。

直接表述作者的观点,点明中心,统帅全文。③描写景物开头法。

即文章的开头先描写人、物、景,渲染气氛,给读者以身临其境的感觉,为烘托人物,触景生情作了铺垫。④提出问题开头法。

即文章的开头先提出问题让人思考,以引起读者的注意和兴趣。⑤倒叙开头法。

即文章开头先写出事情的结果,再写出事情的原因和经过,以造成悬念,增强文章的吸引力。⑥抒发感情开头法。

即文章一开头就将作者的亲身感受和思想感情抒发出来。⑦揭示中心开头法。

有的文章一开头就概括全文的内容并直接点明文章的中心。⑧介绍背景开头法。

根据文章的内容需要,除介绍事情发生的时间,地点外,还介绍事情发生前的形及相关的情况。提纲挈领常变化,多读多写乐自然。

(2)怎样写好文章的结尾①自然结尾法。即用事情的结果作为文章的结尾,事物叙述完了,文章随之结尾。

②点题结尾法。这是一种常见的结尾方法。

要注意:如何总结全文,如何提炼文章中心思想,切忌重复文章基本内容,或重复开头等。③发问结尾法。

即结尾时以发问的形式(反问或设问)提出问题。这种结尾法适合于以写人为主。

您好!

第一要保证每个句子的正确性,这就需要掌握英语简单句的五种基本类型及有关动词的使用规律;第二要注意句子之间的逻辑性,这就要熟练掌握连词的用法;第三要注意字数的要求

1.正反表态法:在第一段中把正反观点都表达出来,最有一句写自己的观点。1-2句对主题的介绍,3-4句正反两种观点,看法做一个描述,5句表达自己的看法。

2.让步法:先把反方观点引出来,做一个肯定的评价,然后笔锋一转,回到自己的观点上来。

3.背景法:适用于对一个现象分析时,至少为2句话。原因,后果,背景。背景介绍用3-4句话,第一段最后一句用几个单词概括一下。

4.提问试:要讨论什么就先把话题以问句形势提出。回答问题表达自己的观点,对自己的观点做个理由概述/先写出反方观点,对其做一个反驳,顺势提出自己的观点。

英语作文一般最好分三段来写。第一段点明主题,第二段论述,第三段总结。

使用高级词汇。所谓高级词汇,就像快乐不要再用happy 等。多积累高级词汇,否则作文就不会高人一等。

运用定语从句等一些复杂一点的句式。运用时注意把握时态。

多背一些英语名言。

中英文作文的九大区别

1.情感分段(中文)和逻辑分段(英文)首先晾出观点,罩住一个自然段,

2.文章中心思想句是读者体会(中文)还是作者交代(英文)——第一段就说

3.引言段(开头第一段)是开门见山(英文)还是层层剥开(中文)

议论文不可以太长,第一段只能3——5句话

4. 落主题句有(英文)没有(中文)

不要把每个主题句分散在不同处,在第一句写

5.线性段落(英文)还是螺旋性段落(中文)说出来——为什么这样说 6.证(中文)与法证(英文)强调事实、数据、普通人事件、该领域专家 7. 一般具体(英文)还是曲折前进(中文)

8. 段内连贯:过渡词语(英语)还是词义重复(中文)

英语:形式语言 中文:意合语言 for, obviously, turn out, as a result, and, in the end 英语靠过渡词的衔接、词汇的纽带、语法的照应

9. 段落之间的连贯:形和义 10.结尾部分是概括(英文)还是训导(中文)

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