自考英语二作文怎么写？ 1、首先，我们需要审题，明确文章立意，确定作文体裁，整理写作思路，全文内容紧扣主题。 2、然后，我们要清楚一篇英语作文的结构，搭出它的结构框架才能往里面填内容。一篇英语作文一般分为了开头段—中间端—结尾段。文章整体的结构确定后，对于每一段的内容也是有要求的，我们需要用一些过度的短语将每一段的脉络梳理清楚。 3、灵活使用英语长短句。过多的英语简单句会让你的作文显得过于简单，过多的长句会让你的作文过于追求形式而忽视实际要表达的意思。在英语作文中应该要将长句和短句结合起来使用才显得整篇文章富有美感，错落有致。 自考英语（二）如何备考 1、背单词 单词是英语的基础，不管是完形填空、阅读理解、词汇、汉译英等题目如何变化，只要考生你积累的单词足够多，那你就可以看懂文章，只有看懂了文章和题目，那做起题来，我们就有事半功倍的效果。 2、做真题 考试考什么，考的就是题，所以考生可以采用题海战术，多做题。尤其是真题，考生要边做边思考，同时边积累和归纳。但做题时，也不能一味的做题，要善于整理自己常常做错的题，同时看看有些题是常考的，把它们都整理归纳起来。 这样不仅可以了解试卷规则，同时还可以熟悉老师的出题风格，当你做得题足够多的时候，就熟能生巧，可以适应各种题型。考生在做题的也要归纳整理自己易做错的题，并观察有哪些题型是爱考的。这样坚持下来，想要通过自考英语是很简单的。自考/成考有疑问、不知道如何总结自考/成考考点内容、不清楚自考/成考报名当地政策，点击底部咨询官网，免费领取复习资料：
Attention,please!I have something to inform you.All the teachers and students are going to go the Space Museum this Saturday.We are required to gather at 7:30 in the morning at the school gate. We will set off and e back by bus.We need to prepare something to eat for lunch.We had better bring some plastic bags to carry our rubbish .Please do not throw litters about in the Space Museum.We should try our best to show our good quality to others.That's all,thank you.（你好，我基本没有改变你的原意，就是按照你写的改了几处语法错误，尤其中间的 we is going to ……这个用法有点不应该哦，再怎样也得we are going to……你说是不是？现在想起来了吧，呵呵~还有就是文章比较平淡，这是一则通知，首先要把要求用简洁明了的语句表达出来，还要注意不要一个模式的句子通篇下来，这样会显得文字贫乏。
下回多多注意哦，愿你更上一层楼哦）。
A.单词：
Great！很好/Perfect！完美/Good！棒/Wonderful！好极了/Correct！是的/Excellent！太棒了
B.短语：
Well done！做得好/Neat and tidy！干的漂亮
C.句型：
That's OK！ 很好。
What a good job you have done！ 做得很棒。
Now you can do better than before. 你还能做得更好。
Your handwriting is excellent！ 书写很漂亮。
Keep it up. 继续加油。
Your English will bee better if you work harder. 加油，努力之后还能更好。
D.段落：
Although you have not been successful,you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practising your spoken English.
虽然你没有成功，但你做得比以往任何时候都好。成功属于勤奋的学习者。我相信如果你继续练习你的英语口语，你会取得越来越大的进步。
E.格言：
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
Failure is the only highroad to success.失败是成功之母。
扩展资料
写评语的4个原则
1、针对特点， 实事求是；
2、鼓励为主， 不忘建议；
3、发挥个性， 引发兴趣；
4、用对代词， 拉近距离。
运用英语写作的能力，作为四项基本语言技能之一，其重要性是为英语教学界所公认的。然而，在当前的英语教学实践中，存在这样一种现状：教师重视英语写作训练，但却忽视对学生作文的反馈，未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色。翻开学生的作业本，看到的多是简单的对、错符号或分数或等级，几乎没有评语，至多是千篇一律的Good / Not bad / All right / Ok或Perfect。以致许多学生对教师的这些简单评语感到莫名其妙，无法正确认识自己的写作水平。以下是本人结合自己的教学实践和亲身体会，就如何写好英语作文评语，及时向学生反馈指导性的意见，浅谈一下自己的几点看法。 一、评语中的语法修改不仅要让学生知其然，更要知其所以然。 中学生在学习英语的过程中，最大的难题就是动词及其用法。由于汉语中动词没有时态变化，英汉的这一差别往往会干扰学生正确使用英语时态。如在表达“我差点忘了。”此意思时，学生在作文中写成“I almost forget.”。其实，此例句独立表意，不受上下文的限制。在评语中，教师应引导学生进行这样的逻辑思维：The action "forget" just now happened, so we should use the Past Tense。Its use is something like the verbs--know / think / recognize…. Do you still remember the sentence--- “Sorry, I didn't recognize you." 学生写记叙文时常混用时态。如，When my cousin was a child, he likes sports and reading. He played volleyball, basketball and so on. He is reading many books about scientists such as Einstein, Madam Curie, Edision etc. And he wants to be a scientist after he graduates the university. 这段文字虽时态混乱，但内容不错，简单地否定或肯定都是不对的，轻则使学生茫然失措，重则挫伤他们的学习兴趣和积极性，比较好的方法是先表扬做得对的地方后纠正错误的地方。我们可以批上：How lovely your cousin is. So are you. In your composition, you meant well, but try to make the tense correct. If you take your story as a past event, use the Past Tense all the way; if you make your story seem to take place now, use the Present Tense. You cant't use tenses at randam! 又如我们教师在批改上面的例文时，如果仅仅在 graduate后添上 from，其结果是接受能力稍差的学生会不知道它为什么这样算正确。但我们教师若再画龙点睛地在旁边批上： “graduate”是不及物动词，其后与from搭配才能接宾语。Remember! 这样，学生就会一目了然。 二、评语要从语篇层次上指导学生如何谋篇布局。 在作文批改中，只是订正学生所犯的语法错误是不够的。在学生习作中常常会出现一些句子，本身并没有错，却是一些涉及到语义整体中有关逻辑纽带、语法纽带和词汇纽带的问题，即是语篇质量方面的失误。对于这些失误，不能简单地以非对即错来论处，无法用语法去解释，而是要靠形成语篇时所应遵循的原则去处理，即要分析语篇的有效性、表达的得体性，并讨论遣词造句是否合乎所用语言的习惯性。例如，在笔者所任教的高三毕业生的习作中有这样的一个句子：“Teachers' Day is coming. I'm going to see my middle-school English teacher next week. 从句子平面看，既无语法错误，亦无书写错误。但从深层上分析，不难看出句子受到严重的母语干扰，且选词不当，造成意义模糊，影响了交流的有效性。批改时，笔者不仅在 English teacher 下划一条横线以示错误，并在此句旁边写道： Enjoy yourself with your teacher on the coming Teachers' Day. But I wonder who you are going to visit next week, a teacher from England or a teacher who teaches you English. 后来该学生修改后交上来：“I'm going to visit my teacher who taught me English in the middle school. 又如在学生写作中发现一个精彩的句子，我们教师应及时给予表扬，可批上：oh, what a nice sentence! / It's very clever of you to end(begin) your work with this beautiful sentence. …… 三、作文评语要以情导知，注意师生间的情感沟通。 前苏联著名教育家霍姆林斯基认为：“情感如同肥沃的土壤，知识的种子就播种在这片土壤上。”教学过程一旦触及学生的情感和意志领域，触及学生的精神需要，这种教学就能发挥高度有效的作用。 长期以来，有的学校一味地抓应试教育，以分数论英雄。于是很多教师只注重对作文本身进行评价，评语中批评多于表扬，纠错多于激励，结果容易使学生在写作时产生急躁、焦急、恐惧、恼怒等负情感体验，从而对培养学生写作能力产生干扰作用。笔者认为，现在的中学生大多数为独生子女，过多的要求甚至批评难以凑效。“愉快教育”才能适应现代化教育发展的需要。我们教师可在评语中给以学生恰如其分的评价，并表达对他们的希望。只要这些希望是真诚的、适时的和有内容的，学生就会从中理解老师对他们的信任、关心和爱心，从而转化为学习的动力。 学期伊始，给差生的评语中要批评但更要多几分鼓励。例如： John, don't you think you were a little lazy in the last term? Now, a new term begins and I hope you can work harder just from the beginning. Cheer up! You know, a good beginning makes a good ending. To tell you a secret, I like your handwriting very much. 给中等生的评语中最好要多一些督促，因为这一类学生往往就缺少那么一点“推动力”，推一推就上去了，松一松便下来了。例如： Mark, you made much progress last term. However, you can do best of all if you study harder. I'm waiting for your good news. 给优等生的评语表扬中要有指正，向他们提出更高的要求。可以批上： You've done best of all in your class, but try to make your handwriting nicer. Cora, you always did well in English last term. But I'm sorry you sometimes made some silly spelling mistakes. You see, little by little one goes far. 如知道某个学生家里最近发生不愉快事情，我们教师可在评语中说些安慰的话： Andy, I'm sorry to know what happened to you. Your class and I hope you won't be sad any more. Remember: if you need help, please come to me. 又如发现一位学生抄袭作业，可在评语中委婉地提出劝戒：Why not believe yourself? I'm sure you can do better if you try to do it by yourself. 这些充满温馨的鼓励或提醒的话语，相信每个学生都乐于接受，都喜欢这种与教师在作业本上的交流。做得好的，会期待着下一次的表扬；做得不够的，会仔细分析自己的错误，不辜负教师的期望。 “积土成山，积水成渊。”给学生写一、两次评语，就会发挥其应有的功效，这是不可能的。我们教师应在平时的写作训练中充分运用激励机制。例如：书法规范和漂亮者优；标点符号正确者优；会正确使用连词、分词、从句者优；会用主题句、支撑句者优；典型句使用恰当者优。总之，教师只有把评价学生的写作自始至终放在发现学生字、词、句、段、文方面的优秀之处和可取之处，并时而通过评语与他们促膝谈心，表达特别的关注和爱护，学生才能从遭遇失败到尝试成功，从惧怕写到乐于并善于写，进而全面提高自身的英语写作能力。（注：此论文荣获台山市教育学会第二十届年会提交论文二等奖）
老师评语写得好，学生学习好。那么，英语老师写评语，有什么套路和方法呢？你的作业评语，学生看得懂吗？评语是给学生看的，一方面要切合学生学习能力，所用单词不能过于复杂，句子也不能太长。另一方面要做到循序渐进，由易到难，能够起到"跳一跳，摘到桃子"的作用，也就是说学生通过上下文的猜测或借助于词典就能理解。例句It's very clever of you to do so.It's nice of you to write this way.I'm sure you can do your work better next time.You've done a good job.You are doing wonderfully!You can do better now than you did before.涉及了所学的知识点吗？语言学习在于利用，如果在评语中插入所学知识，学生在评语中又能很好的体会和巩固知识点，学会运用。例句You have improved a lot.I am proud of you.What good work!You are the pride of our class.Work harder,and you will make more progress.The harder you work,the sooner you will improve.Come on!I am sure you will catch up soon.学生也想被尊重、被表扬、被认可每一个学生都希望得到认可，成绩不好的学生也不例外，一句好的评语可以激起学生的学习热情。一句鼓励，让好学生更上一层楼；中等学生改正缺点，继续努力；成绩落后的学生树立信心。例句It's good to be correct.It's also important to be creative.Excellent.You haven't made any mistakes,but do try to make your handwriting neater.对中等生的作业要慎重评价，在评语中要多督促。例句You had better be more careful!Pay more attention to the tenses.Your work is quite goodexcept for a few spelling mistakes.Keep it up.Remember that little by little one goes far.对于差生的作业要多点激励，温和地指出错误的同时，也要指出他的优点以资鼓励。例句Lily,I like your handwriting very much although there are some mistakes here.I am sure you can correct them.Bill,I think you can do better if you work harder.Your work has improved.I am sure there is nothing too difficult for us to learn.可以是你跟学生之间沟通的桥梁评语言辞恳切，切中要害；或热情鼓励、或委婉告诫……通过评语，教师尽可把祝福、问候、关切、激励、真诚、信任之情化作甘甜的泉水，去滋润学生的心田，引起师生教与学的共鸣，达到教与学两者的和谐与统一。例如在节假日或某学生生日前，教师可以给予学生一些祝愿语：例句Merry Christmas!Happy New Year!Enjoy yourself in the coming holidays!Happy birthday！Many happy returns!又如某个学生因为生病缺课作业完成得很糟糕，教师就要说一些安慰的话：例句Lingling,you have made a few mistakes in your work.I know that is because you were absent...I think it is only natural.Don't lose heart.I am ready to help you.再如某个学生因为考试不及格失去信心，教师就要说一些激励的话：例句I am sorry to hear that you didn't pass the exam.I hope you are not too disappointed.I want to cheer you up with the saying"Failure is the mother of success".I nope to see much improvement in your future studies.作业评语形式可以多种多样评语不仅是对学生作业完成程度的评价，还可以包括生活等各个方面，这样学生会感到老师对每个学生都用心，而不是敷衍了事。除了内用多样性，形式也可以多样性。一个单词、一个短语、句子或者是一句名言！例句A.一个词：Great!／Perfect!／Good!／Wonderful!／Correct!／Excellent!B.短语：Well done!／Neat and tidy!C.句型：That's OK!What a good job you have done!Now you can do better than before.Your handwriting is excellent!Keep it up.Your English will become better if you work harder.D.段落：Although you have not been successful,you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practising your spoken English.E.格言：Practice makes perfect.Where there is a will,there is a way.Failure is the only highroad to success.
很多同学都会自考英语二的作文能得多少分？考场作文存在很多的变数，小编也不能没有根据的给大家分数，现把自考英语二评分标准发给大家，同学们可以参考评分估分，实际分数相差不大，毕竟自己属于哪个档分，自己是清楚的。1、自考英语二短文写作评分原则本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。阅卷人应就总体印象给分，而不是按照语言的错误的数量扣分。评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分。应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次分数。该给高分时就应给高分（包含满分），该给低分时就给低分（包含0分）。拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英式、美式拼写及用法均可接受。如书写较差难以辨认，以致影响交际，或字数明显少于要求，将分数降低一个档次。2、自考英语二短文写作评分标准（1）第一档25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务。●清楚地表达了全部内容要点。●运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求。●语言运用较为准确、恰当。第二档19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务。●清楚的表达了全部或关键内容要点。●运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求。●语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解。第三档13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务。●提及了关键内容要点（可能漏掉了个别内容）。●运用的语法机构和词汇满足了任务的最低要求。●存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解。第四档7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务。●遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点。●语法结构和词汇单调。●语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解。第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务。●明显遗漏内容要点。●语法结构和词汇及单调。●语言错误很多，严重影响理解。0分：所表达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关。
自考英语二是必考科目，而英语二最重要的拿分点之一就是作文。今天小编给大家分享英语作文万能模板及满分范文，以供参考。自考英语二模板汇总背句型1. as is known /as it is known to all…众所周知2. with the pace of modern life increasing…. 随着现代生活步伐的加快3. with the development of modern society…随着现代社会的4. personally I’m in favor of the former/latter view…我个人偏向于前/后一种观点5. there is no doubt that…勿容质疑6. however everything has two sides…任何事物都具有两方面7. as a Chinese saying goes…正如中国的一句谚语所说8. the same is the case with sth…也不例外9. in the appraisal of…在。。。的评价中11. according to…there are at least three good reasons…firstly secondly…thirdly…列举的用法12. In my opinion, in the appraisal of…it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything.We should appreciate the great contribution made by them,and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them.我认为，在对….的评价中，完全的肯定任何事情和否认任何事情都是片面的。我们在欣赏到他们做出的巨大的贡献的同时也要更加注意他们带来的问题。英语作文速成模板1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1. 有一些人认为…2. 另一些人认为……3. 我的看法……The topic of ①—————– （主题） is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②—————– （支持 A的理由一） What is more, ③ ————- 理由二 ). Moreover, ④—————( 理由三 ).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,⑤—————–( 支持 B 的理由一 ). Secondly (besides), ⑥—————— （理由二） . Thirdly (finally), ⑦——————( 理由三 ).From my point of view, I think ⑧—————- （我的观点） . The reason is that ⑨——————–( 原因 ). As a matter of fact, there are someother reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that ①—————- （观点一） . For example, they think②—————– （举例说明）． And it will bring them ③—————( 为他们带来的好处 ).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, ④————-( 我不同意该看法的）万能模板（一）It has been a hot topic for a long time whether______（某事物 / 问题）. Some people take it for granted that______ （一种观点）. However, other reckon that______（另一种观点）.Those people who hold the former opinion believe______（观点一的理由一）. In addition,_____（观点一的理由二）.However, there are still others who advocate the latter opinion because they hold______ （观点二的理由一）.And,_____ （观点二的理由二） .What ’ s more,______ （观点二的理由三）. So______ （总结观点二）.As for me, my favor goes to______ （两种观点选其一） .For one thing,______ （个人看法依据一） . For another,______ （个人看法的依据二） . But______ （提出某事物 /问题需要改进的地方） .And I hope （提出自己的希望） .（二）Nowadays/ At present _____（概述现象）. The Phenomenon has become a heated topic among the people around us / The phenomenon has brought into focus. /_____ （某现象）, which has arouse great concern______ （阐述现象表现）.There are many factors that many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. / The reasons（factors ） that contribute to______ （该现象） are varied. First of all/To startwith,_____ （原因一）. In addition/Furthermore/What is more/Moreover,______（原因二）.Finally,______（原因三） .On the whole,_____ （总结原因）.As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to_____ （我的做法 / 我的看法） ______（总结观点）.（三）Nowadays, there are more and more [ 某种现象 ] in [ 某种场合 ]. It is estimatedthat [相关数据 ]. Why have there been so many [ 某种现象 ]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [ 原因一 ]. Besides, [ 原因二 ]. The third one is[ 原因三 ]. To sum up, the main cause of [ 某种现象 ] is due to [ 最主要原因 ].It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解决办法一 ]. On the other hand, [解决办法二 ]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ 某种现象 ].段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.2.俗话说 (常言道 )……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying______. It”s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外 (而且 )……。Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because______. Besides， ______.5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……People ‘s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年轻人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。______ has become a hot topic among people， especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。______ has been playing an increasingly important role in ourday-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢 ?According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph ，it can be seen that______ while.Obviously ， ______， but why?中间段落句1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。But I don”t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example ，____.Worst of all ， ___.3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的， (也是 )非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……______is necessary and important to our country”s development and construction. First ，______.What”s more, _____.Most important of all,______.4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，Confronted with______ ， we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing ， ______For another ， ______6. 早就应该拿出行动了。 比如说……， 另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。It is high time that something was done about it. For example._____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.7. 为什么……?第一个原因是…… ;第二个原因是…… ;第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.自学考试英语二作文大全作文一：To whom it may concern:I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.WangMin作文二：职业生涯的选择When it come to (the career choice),different people hold different views.Some contend that (you should be committed to a lifetime career).For one thing,(you must show you loyalty).For another( you can have more room to improve yourself in one protessional.)In spite of all these claims,others maintain that( you can change jobs fairly often),and they point out that(job-hop canbroaden your horizons). Another instance often cited is that (is that you can have better chance to earn more durin the process of job-hop).It’s no easy task to find a satisfactory answer to the issue.As for me,there’s some truth to both arguments. It’s a advisable to (make your choice depending on a ccording to your context).作文三：E-books or paper booksNowadays,there is a growing concern over the issue of e-books or paper books.Some people hold the view that e-books are better than paper books,because e-books are cheaper and more convenient than paper books.e-books can help us to get more knowledge at lower costs.While other people argue that paper books are better than e-books,because paper books are more real and more traditional than e-books,paper books can help us to feel and touth the texture of real papers.In conclusion,I agree that both aspects should be considered when talking about e-books or paper books.However I prefer e-books rather than paper books,because I like to get more kownledge at lower costs.作文四：Fight against HazeIn recent years,we have to face a problem of haze,which is becoming more and more serious.First of all,it can lead to environment risk,which may cause a series of problem.What’s more,it can lead to financial risk,which may cause employment issues.Last but not least,it can lead to health riskwhich may cause illness.In the face of haze,we should take a series of effective measuresto cope with the situation.For one thing ,in terms of governmental behaviors,government should make relative policesto control haze.For another thing,in terms of public behaviors,people should keep our behaviors in check to control haze.fanally,in terms of personal behaviors,we should start from the little things around us.As more and more focus is placed on haze,I am confident in a bright future if all of us take action from this moment.作文五：My hobbyI have a lot of hobbies,such as reading,running,playing basketball,watching movies and so on.But I prefer reading rather than others.When I was little,I couldn’t read or write,my mom taught me to read and write everday.After I grow up,I often buy myself a variety of books to read and learn.I am used to reading during my free time.Till now,it is one of my favorites.It help me to better understand the world and achieve better self.I hope that everyone can enjoy the fun of reading,which is really helpful for our lives.报考考试有疑问、不知道如何考点内容、不清楚报考考试当地政策，点击底部咨询猎考网，免费获取个人学历提升方案：
In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark。
运用英语写作的能力，作为四项基本语言技能之一，其重要性是为英语教学界所公认的。
然而，在当前的英语教学实践中，存在这样一种现状：教师重视英语写作训练，但却忽视对学生作文的反馈，未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色。翻开学生的作业本，看到的多是简单的对、错符号或分数或等级，几乎没有评语，至多是千篇一律的Good / Not bad / All right / Ok或Perfect。
以致许多学生对教师的这些简单评语感到莫名其妙，无法正确认识自己的写作水平。以下是本人结合自己的教学实践和亲身体会，就如何写好英语作文评语，及时向学生反馈指导性的意见，浅谈一下自己的几点看法。
一、评语中的语法修改不仅要让学生知其然，更要知其所以然。 中学生在学习英语的过程中，最大的难题就是动词及其用法。
由于汉语中动词没有时态变化，英汉的这一差别往往会干扰学生正确使用英语时态。如在表达“我差点忘了。”
此意思时，学生在作文中写成“I almost fet.”。其实，此例句独立表意，不受上下文的限制。
在评语中，教师应引导学生进行这样的逻辑思维：The action "fet" just now happened, so we should use the Past Tense。Its use is something like the verbs--know / think / recognize…. Do you still remember the sentence--- “Sorry, I didn't recognize you." 学生写记叙文时常混用时态。
如，When my cousin was a child, he likes sports and reading. He played volleyball, basketball and so on. He is reading many books about scientists such as Einstein, Madam Curie, Edision etc. And he wants to be a scientist after he graduates the university. 这段文字虽时态混乱，但内容不错，简单地否定或肯定都是不对的，轻则使学生茫然失措，重则挫伤他们的学习兴趣和积极性，比较好的方法是先表扬做得对的地方后纠正错误的地方。我们可以批上：How lovely your cousin is. So are you. In your position, you meant well, but try to make the tense correct. If you take your story as a past event, use the Past Tense all the way; if you make your story seem to take place now, use the Present Tense. You cant't use tenses at randam！ 又如我们教师在批改上面的例文时，如果仅仅在 graduate后添上 from，其结果是接受能力稍差的学生会不知道它为什么这样算正确。
但我们教师若再画龙点睛地在旁边批上： “graduate”是不及物动词，其后与from搭配才能接宾语。Remember！ 这样，学生就会一目了然。
二、评语要从语篇层次上指导学生如何谋篇布局。 在作文批改中，只是订正学生所犯的语法错误是不够的。
在学生习作中常常会出现一些句子，本身并没有错，却是一些涉及到语义整体中有关逻辑纽带、语法纽带和词汇纽带的问题，即是语篇质量方面的失误。对于这些失误，不能简单地以非对即错来论处，无法用语法去解释，而是要靠形成语篇时所应遵循的原则去处理，即要分析语篇的有效性、表达的得体性，并讨论遣词造句是否合乎所用语言的习惯性。
例如，在笔者所任教的高三毕业生的习作中有这样的一个句子：“Teachers' Day is ing. I'm going to see my middle-school English teacher next week. 从句子平面看，既无语法错误，亦无书写错误。但从深层上分析，不难看出句子受到严重的母语干扰，且选词不当，造成意义模糊，影响了交流的有效性。
批改时，笔者不仅在 English teacher 下划一条横线以示错误，并在此句旁边写道： Enjoy yourself with your teacher on the ing Teachers' Day. But I wonder who you are going to visit next week, a teacher from England or a teacher who teaches you English. 后来该学生修改后交上来：“I'm going to visit my teacher who taught me English in the middle school. 又如在学生写作中发现一个精彩的句子，我们教师应及时给予表扬，可批上：oh, what a nice sentence! / It's very clever of you to end(begin) your work with this beautiful sentence. …… 三、作文评语要以情导知，注意师生间的情感沟通。 前苏联著名教育家霍姆林斯基认为：“情感如同肥沃的土壤，知识的种子就播种在这片土壤上。”
教学过程一旦触及学生的情感和意志领域，触及学生的精神需要，这种教学就能发挥高度有效的作用。 长期以来，有的学校一味地抓应试教育，以分数论英雄。
于是很多教师只注重对作文本身进行评价，评语中批评多于表扬，纠错多于激励，结果容易使学生在写作时产生急躁、焦急、恐惧、恼怒等负情感体验，从而对培养学生写作能力产生干扰作用。笔者认为，现在的中学生大多数为独生子女，过多的要求甚至批评难以凑效。
“愉快教育”才能适应现代化教育发展的需要。我们教师可在评语中给以学生恰如其分的评价，并表达对他们的希望。
只要这些希望是真诚的、适时的和有内容的，学生就会从中理解老师对他们的信任、关心和爱心，从而转化为学习的动力。 学期伊始，给差生的评语中要批评但更要多几分鼓励。
例如： John, don't you think you were a little lazy in the last term? Now, a new term begins and I hope you can work harder just from th。
2010 will be end ,and 2011will be e .In the new year ,we must be have much wishes ,because new year means that things end and another things start.So we need to make a new year"s resolution in order to the second year will be better.I want to share my new year"s resolution with you. Firstly,i decide to try my best to learn english .because my english so poor that it affects my other subject.I willface many differences ,such as broadening my vocabulary, training my listening ,improving my write and so on. I must work hard because i don"t want to behind the times. Secondly ,i will give up watching football games because every time it takes me o hours ,which makes me not finish my homework .As a student ,study is our duty ,so i wii focused more on study and less on playing . In order to my future ,i will work hard! 2010年将结束，2011即将到了。
在新的一年，我们必须有很多的愿望，因为新的一年意味着事情结束和另一个东西开始.所以我们需要作出新的一年“的计划，以便在第二个今年将是更好的新年与你分享。首先，我决定尽我所能地学习英语。
因为我的英语很差，它会影响我的其他的科目.都有不小的差距，如扩大我的词汇，我的听力训练，提高我的写作等。我必须努力工作，因为我不想落后于时代。
其次，我会放弃，因为每看一次我花了两个小时，这使我无法完成我的作业足球比赛作为一个学生。，学习是我们的职责，所以我的将会更注重学习和玩少一点。
为了我的将来，我会努力的！ 请采纳！（中英兼有）。
总体上来看，文章写的是有一定水平的，不过作为一篇好的作文评价，我觉得有一点你要注意，那就是文章一定不要消极，例如：I hate, I hate a thing,which is called lifetime,is a short life.这一句你要表达的心情我能够理解，毕竟生命是宝贵的，它很短暂，能不能发挥它的价值，就看你是怎样看待它的，我个人认为诸如If I could live in the world for ever……，If I could live in the world for ever……这些句子应该在作文中（尤其是大型考试的作文）尽量不要出现，文章应尽量表现出积极的，向上的生活态度和价值观，另外文中：北戴河 这个词一定要用 Beidaihe，不要用中文，其他的注意语法和单词拼写就可以了，it was very bright WITH the black cloud.大写部分个人认为改为IN 或 ON比较合适。
我最喜爱的歌手（My Favourite Singer）
She is such an ideal singer,who is famous for"Happy Winter","I'm same with you"and so on!
She is a girl with a lot of talent. She is a girl but she has individuality like a boy. On the stage, she sings and dances so well. She is so happy and she makes us excited… Can you guess who she is? Yes, she is Li Yuchun, the winner of "Super Girl 2005."
She is a student of Sichuan Music College in Grade 3. She is enty-one this year. She is 1.74 metres tall. Now she is very popular in China and even in the world. I know she worked hard in the past, and has succeeded today. I'll learn from her and try my best to achieve my dream.
I like her because she is so cool and lovely. I love her because she makes me feel happy. I enjoy her because she is independent and she has the individuality of herself.
Li Yuchun, I'll cheer for you forever!
这个介绍的是李宇春的，不知道你用这个可不可以。但还是祝你学习进步哦~
从这两篇作文来看，你的词汇量及句法的运用是不错的.先说第一篇，提示的信息都已经包括在内了，但是我觉得句子用得有点生硬.给出的信息只是起到提示的作用，不一定要逐字逐句的翻译.比如文中提到“学生的反应：喜欢该课外活动，能放松心情、校园生活更丰富充实”，而且你是以第一人称写的，所以你就是以该校学生的身份在写.The responses of the students indicate that they like these after-class activities for the reason that they can not only relax and refresh their minds but also make their school life more wonderful.就可以改成we enjoy these after-class activities because they can not only relax and refresh our minds but also make our school life more wonderful.就行了啊，注意文章的人称要保持一致. Physical exercise\reading\singing\musical instrument playing and English games are included.这句话也可以改改，就直接用there are physical exercise.就可以了，简单，明了.另外，注意句子与句子直接的连接，可以适当运用一些关联词.第二篇文章写得不错，文章结构、层次都很好，有一小点错误，instead of后要加V-ing。
我根据你写的意思改写了一下，你可以对照看看，我认为这样的表达会更贴切.what does happiness mean?i think it is east to answer this question,because happiness all lies in the daily life and somethings you do everyday.people always pursue happiness by doing things they lilke,for example,they work hard to earn more money,to get prerogative,or just by simply having their favorite food.however,i think happiness is more than all of these things.for example,friendship and knowledge can also bring us happiness.to be more specific,in my opinion,study hard and acquire more knowledge is one of the major way to persue happiness.because we can not only feel happy when learning new things,we can also get to know how to creat happiness in the process of learning.what's more,sharing things with people around you or helping others are also important ways to feel happy.because when you do so,you can turn one person's happy into o,or even more.in a word,we can get more positive energy and feel more happy by learning more,sharing more,and helping others more.。
in my opinion,it is better for us to be taught in both English and Chinese.It's easy to get across.Because not every class have too many top-students,the way is good for all classes.Every coin have o sides.The way makes the atmosphere bad.And it's not good for us to promote listening and speaking skills.Finally we may too depend on Chinese and ignore the importence of English.IN my view.I think teachers should increase useing English in class when students' English ing better and better.。
很多同学都会自考英语二的作文能得多少分？考场作文存在很多的变数，小编也不能没有根据的给大家分数，现把自考英语二评分标准发给大家，同学们可以参考评分估分，实际分数相差不大，毕竟自己属于哪个档分，自己是清楚的。1、自考英语二短文写作评分原则本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。阅卷人应就总体印象给分，而不是按照语言的错误的数量扣分。评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分。应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次分数。该给高分时就应给高分（包含满分），该给低分时就给低分（包含0分）。拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英式、美式拼写及用法均可接受。如书写较差难以辨认，以致影响交际，或字数明显少于要求，将分数降低一个档次。2、自考英语二短文写作评分标准（1）第一档25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务。●清楚地表达了全部内容要点。●运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求。●语言运用较为准确、恰当。第二档19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务。●清楚的表达了全部或关键内容要点。●运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求。●语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解。第三档13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务。●提及了关键内容要点（可能漏掉了个别内容）。●运用的语法机构和词汇满足了任务的最低要求。●存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解。第四档7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务。●遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点。●语法结构和词汇单调。●语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解。第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务。●明显遗漏内容要点。●语法结构和词汇及单调。●语言错误很多，严重影响理解。0分：所表达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关。
1、第一档 25-30分圆满完成了试题规定的任务，清楚地表达了全部内容要点。运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，语言运用较为准确、恰当。2、第二档 19-24分完成了试题规定的任务，清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点，运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求，语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解。3、第三档 13-18分基本完成了试题规定的任务，提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)，运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求，存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解。4、第四档 7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务，遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点，语法结构和词汇单调。语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解。5、第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务，明显遗漏内容要点，语法结构和词汇极单调，语言错误很多，严重影响理解。6、0分所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价;所写内容与题目要求完全无关。
英语作文评语大全
1、本文围绕……这一中心组织材料，语言准确，鲜明，生动，内容极其丰富具体，不失一篇成功之作。
2、本文在故事情节上或许并无特别之吸引人之处，但仍不失为一篇成功之作，其一，较好地刻画了角色的形象，其二语言生动丰富，生活气息浓，起到了良好的表情达意之效果。
3、本文很好体现了……的特点，深刻的主题与新颖的构思相得益彰。
4、作品的构思是巧妙的，文笔也是简洁流畅。想象大胆，富有创造力，文章读起来新颖奇特极具吸引力。
5、主题凝练，集中，议论深刻，有力，震撼人心。
6、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强。以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分。
7、文章简洁明了，语言平淡朴实。
8、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。
9、全文语言朴实，结构自然。文章结构严谨，首尾呼应。
10、本文三大成功之处：首先注意选取最美好的片段来写，其次用词准确，第三文章结构紧凑。
11、叙述事情条理清晰，能正确地使用动词，运用比喻贴切，生动。献计献策读后能从中受到教育。
12、这篇文章以具体的事例，生动优美的语言，新颖别致的写法，表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞。
13、通过丰富人物的语言和动作，衬托出人物的思想品质。文章想象合情合理，叙述自然生动，结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。
14、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。
15、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕……进行。文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手。
845480066，软文写作没有一定的知识功底是写不出来好文章的，我是找他写的，最前面就是扣维来的。
1、利弊分析型作文模板：
思路：1、描述现象 2、介绍观点（第二段，利；第三段，弊）3、作者观点/结论？
2、图表型作文模版：
思路 第一段，结合图表，将图表的信息描述清楚，点出主题。
第二段，围绕主题展开讨论，分析原因。
第三段，结合上段讨论，发表自己针对这种现象的评论，说明危害，重申自己观。
作文取高分难，但拿到个相对高的分数还是不太难的，特别是作文拿到20分以上应该说比较容易。参考以往考生经验（主要感谢一下论坛老人“金翅膀”），自己总结加工了几类模板，水平不高，主要为大家开阔思路、提供一个参考，表见笑。
大家用模板的时候总担心与别人雷同，如果单纯背诵抄袭模板那就太低级了。模板主要为我们提供框架和行文思路，首先，根据题目我们要能知道大概结构和一些标志性语句；其次，要给模板赋予自己的个性，这样作文既写得还不错，也不会雷同了。图画类作文图片类型有单图片（双图片）说明和双图片对比说明。我根据自己的想法，进行了以下简单分类，几种不同类型的作文模板，各有不同组织框架，根据框架行文风格可分为：
对比类：对同一事物的不同选择；面对困难、机遇、责任、失败、追求 批判类：对社会不好现象的批评；污染、浪费、交通、抄袭、啃老、食品 议论类：对社会热点问题的议论；网友、崇拜、就业、网络、中西文化 正气类：弘扬社会正气，高尚品德等。
英语试题中一个极其重要的部分就是写作，分为两个部分——Part A的应用文写作和Part B的看图写作。长期以来，Part A 应用文写作部分都是以书信的写作为主，除了2010年英语一考试考查过一次通知写作，2014年的考研英语也果然不出所料，仍然是考查书信的写作。书信的写作除了掌握英语信件固有的写作格式之外，书信中具体内容的写作是得分的关键。但由于书信的种类繁多，如建议信、邀请信、咨询信、感谢信等等，复习考研的同学常常因为要记忆不同书信类型写作模板，而对应用文写作望而生畏。这是一个学习书信写作的误区，其实只要抓住了书信写作的思路，复习考研的同学就可以轻松搞定考研写作的Part A部分。
通常来讲，英语书信写作无非遵从三段论的写作思路，而且每段的具体写作内容也是既定的，在第一段要开篇名义，说明写信目的，是请求帮助、提供建议、表达感谢还是歉意。另外，如果是非私人信函，还需要加上简单的自我介绍。第二段是书信的主体段，考生一定要根据写作指令中的具体要求，切题发挥，展开写作。最后一段通常是表达感谢/歉意，以及期待回复。如果复习考研的同学能牢牢抓住这个写作思路，无论是什么类型的信件，都能轻松搞定。
抓住以上这个书信写作思路，不仅能大大减少考生备考的记忆负担，而且能透过纷繁复杂的写作指令，直击写作核心内容。比如2014年英语二的应用文写作题目“Directions: Suppose you are going to study abroad and share an apartment with John, a local student. Write him to email to
1) tell him about your living habits, and
2) ask for advice about living there.”
这道题目要求写的书信很难具体确认是属于何种类型的书信，但是只要我们根据老师在课上讲解的以上这个写作思路，考生就可以轻松搞定这道考题。第一段需要简单的自我介绍，并且表明写信目的：告知John自己的生活习惯和咨询生活建议;第二段根据具体的写作要求，展开写作，详细介绍自己的生活习惯、简单询问建议;结尾段表示感谢，并期待回信。
1、利弊分析型作文模板：思路：1、描述现象 2、介绍观点（第二段，利；第三段，弊）3、作者观点/结论？2、图表型作文模版：思路 第一段，结合图表，将图表的信息描述清楚，点出主题。
第二段，围绕主题展开讨论，分析原因。
第三段，结合上段讨论，发表自己针对这种现象的评论，说明危害，重申自己观。
作文取高分难，但拿到个相对高的分数还是不太难的，特别是作文拿到20分以上应该说比较容易。
参考以往考生经验（主要感谢一下论坛老人“金翅膀”），自己总结加工了几类模板，水平不高，主要为大家开阔思路、提供一个参考，表见笑。
大家用模板的时候总担心与别人雷同，如果单纯背诵抄袭模板那就太低级了。
模板主要为我们提供框架和行文思路，首先，根据题目我们要能知道大概结构和一些标志性语句；其次，要给模板赋予自己的个性，这样作文既写得还不错，也不会雷同了。
图画类作文图片类型有单图片（双图片）说明和双图片对比说明。
我根据自己的想法，进行了以下简单分类，几种不同类型的作文模板，各有不同组织框架，根据框架行文风格可分为：对比类：对同一事物的不同选择；面对困难、机遇、责任、失败、追求 批判类：对社会不好现象的批评；污染、浪费、交通、抄袭、啃老、食品 议论类：对社会热点问题的议论；网友、崇拜、就业、网络、中西文化 正气类：弘扬社会正气，高尚品德等。
A- You won't believe who I met yeaterday!B- Who? David Beckham? A- Seriously, I met Jason yesterday afternoon on my way home. You konw Jason, the fat little boy in our class when we were in primary school. B- Yeah, I remember him, he used to be very fat and short,and we called him ＂Little Potato.＂ He's very cute.A- But he doesn't look at the Jason we knew at all now! He's even taller than me and looks like a grown man.B- Wow, what happened? A- I also asked him, and he said he started playing basketball every day 2 years ago, and now he's very healthy and not fat at all. B- Good to hear that. Little Jason bees Tall Jason. Maybe we should also do some exercise.
Non-mercial advertising, promotion is in order to achieve the purpose of doing some kind of advertising, not for profit, such as political, legal, cultural publicity, as well as notices, bulletins, instructions, notices, etc., also known as non-economic advertising. Non-mercial distinction beeen advertising and mercial advertising1, non-mercial advertising and mercials advertising the most obvious difference is that the content and sponsorship of different advertisers.2, the profitability of mercial advertising pany, and his advertisements are usually tangible goods or services, on the contrary, non-mercial advertising usually emphasizes motivation, creativity, attitudes and views.3, the o goals of advertising is more significant difference, mercial advertising is looking forward to selling products or services, non-mercial advertising is an attempt to change public attitudes, or the popularity of social movements.Commercial1） anizational behavior: convenience store advertising, bottled water aspirated, beauty salon, various intermediaries ...2) the long-term profitability of individual behavior: Amway, Avon, insurance, family kitchen (private kitchens) ...Non-mercial1) The temporary personal profit behavior: own rental for sale, second-hand transfer ...2) non-profit personal behavior: grants, donations, non-profit Central Purchasing ...3) institutions of public welfare behavior: charity, volunteer recruitment, etc. ...
我爱我班，因为我是她其中的一员。
她是我成长的摇篮， 她让我有了无数伙伴。
我爱我班，因为她给我带来无限的温暖。
她是我温馨的家园， 她让我体味到了友爱的甘甜。
我爱我班，因为她给我带来了成功的希望。
她是我辛勤劳作的田园， 她让我品尝到了收获背后的辛酸。
我爱我班，因为她赋予我无穷的欢乐。
她是我成长的乐园 她让我享受到了阳光的灿烂。
英语：（I love my class, because I am her one. She is the cradle which I grow, She let me have the innumerable partners. I love my class, because she brings the infinite warmth to me. She is my warm homeland, She let me appreciate the friendly affection sweetness. I love my class, because she has brought the successful hope to me. She is my industrious practical training countryside, She let me taste behind harvest bitter. I love my class, because she entrusts with me the infinite happiness. She is the paradise which I grow She let me enjoy the sunlight brightness. ） 还是自己写得好啦，最好不要抄别人的，那样不好的。
不要转哦！！
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looks very young.She's about thirty years old, and she wears glasses.She's funny . But she is strict with us. She wants us to study hard, Her lessons are interesting. We are very happy in her class and we all like her lessons. She is a good teacher, and we all like her.7.Music Lovers Wanted（招聘音乐爱好者）We need more music lovers in our club. Do you like music? Can you sing? Can you dance? Can you play the violin, the piano, the guitar or the drums? If your answers are “yes”, then you can join our music club. Please call Gina
A:The final exam is ing,how do you study for final exam?B:First,I will review all the knowledge I learned this term.Then,I'll find some key points I don't really understand,and go through them.If I have some problems,I will ask the teacher next day.A:Oh,it's really a good way to study for the final exam.For me,I would like to do some exercises,and check the test we had before.I'll focus on the mistakes I have made.So that I won't do the same thing again.B:That's a good idea.
more problem Interracial marriages can cause many problems within the family. Due to the fact that the couple has a different family background, culture, and custom, and social class level, many disagreements can occur. Religion can be a problem. If the o has a different religion then the other one, there is a problem. Because some religions celebrate certain holidays while others don't. In Christianity, for example, Christians celebrate Christmas while Buddudists don't. Eating habits can also be a problem. One might eat certain food the other don't or dislike. After all, their offspring will encounter problems too. Childrens who are mixed are not likely to be accepted in certain areas in a munity. They often have a hard time fitting in. Interracial marriage is not a good idea, but it is still alright to marry someone who is different than you.
From the distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in o parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
考研英语写作复习毕竟是一个需要长期积累的过程，平时可以多阅读一些英文原版的文章，每周写上一两篇作文，看见好的句子，好的模版就顺手积累下来，聚沙成塔，积累的多了，考试时心中自然就有数。
如果要买辅导书，可以看看红宝书的写作180篇，是图画+话题形式，而且书里面强调的“三段式写法”，我个人觉得比较有用。
上班路上扶盲人老奶奶过马路 清晨去上班，803上遇到了一位盲人老奶奶，和我在同一站下，售票员扶她下了车，我扶她过了马路。
这个事件是多莫适合写在学雷锋日前后老师布置的作文儿里阿，小学内时候总是苦于寻找不到这样的生活素材，每次写好人好事都得生编，这要搁内会儿怎么着也得写他400字儿的，底下最好注明：此文根据真人真事改编而成。
而现在我只想说说内售票员。
下车前，老人早早的就站了起来，摸索着往车门方向走过去，这时候坐在一边的售票员立刻不耐的说：还没到站呢，您别站起来，坐那儿，一会儿肯定让您下去。
过了一会儿，老人又起来，售票员又让她坐下，于是老人又坐下。
如此这般，第三次的时候，老人终于没坐下，挪到车门口说：我怕一会儿麻烦别人。
后来，下车后，我去扶她过马路，她一直问我顺不顺路，不顺的话就不用麻烦了，我想这一定是一个自尊要强的老太太。
其实不能说那个售票员做得不好，她该尽到的职责都尽到了，给老人找座，给老人报站，嘱咐老人不要摔倒，扶老人下车，只是话里话外那明显能感受到的不耐烦让人觉得难受，就差这一点就做得不到位，99分都被这1分拉不及格了。
北京服务行业中的女性一向被人们广泛谈论，就是因为她们这种好事不好好做得理不让人我是北京人我怕谁的态度，大大咧咧的人听了看了可能不在意，稍微敏感一些的人就不舒服了。
你说何必呢，做好事非得以这种形式表现出来，嘴里说着“您”生就让人感觉不出来尊重，要不人李素丽能评上先进呢，人家好歹有耐心有笑脸儿，甭管真的假的，人家至少还乐意装一下儿，而且装得挺像。
而现在我只想说说内售票员。
下车前，老人早早的就站了起来，摸索着往车门方向走过去，这时候坐在一边的售票员立刻不耐的说：还没到站呢，您别站起来，坐那儿，一会儿肯定让您下去。
过了一会儿，老人又起来，售票员又让她坐下，于是老人又坐下。
如此这般，第三次的时候，老人终于没坐下，挪到车门口说：我怕一会儿麻烦别人。
后来，下车后，我去扶她过马路，她一直问我顺不顺路，不顺的话就不用麻烦了，我想这一定是一个自尊要强的老太太。
其实不能说那个售票员做得不好，她该尽到的职责都尽到了，给老人找座，给老人报站，嘱咐老人不要摔倒，扶老人下车，只是话里话外那明显能感受到的不耐烦让人觉得难受，就差这一点就做得不到位，99分都被这1分拉不及格了。
北京服务行业中的女性一向被人们广泛谈论，就是因为她们这种好事不好好做得理不让人我是北京人我怕谁的态度，大大咧咧的人听了看了可能不在意，稍微敏感一些的人就不舒服了。
你说何必呢，做好事非得以这种形式表现出来，嘴里说着“您”生就让人感觉不出来尊重，要不人李素丽能评上先进呢，人家好歹有耐心有笑脸儿，甭管真的假的，人家至少还乐意装一下儿，而且装得挺像。
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高等教育自学考试英语二选择题（阅读判断10分、阅读选择10分、）非选择题（补全句子10分、填句补文10分、填词补文15分、完形补文15分、短文写作30分）。自学考试满分100分，考试题包括客观性试题和主观性试题，分别占卷面总分的55%和45%，及格分数线为60分。 自考英语二作文评分标准 第一档25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务。 清楚地表达了全部内容要点，运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，语言运用较为准确、恰当。 第二档19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务。 清楚的表达了全部或关键内容要点。运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求。语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解。 第三档13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务。 提及了关键内容要点（可能漏掉了个别内容）。运用的语法机构和词汇满足了任务的最低要求。存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解。 第四档7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务。 遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点。语法结构和词汇单调。语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解。 第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务。 明显遗漏内容要点。语法结构和词汇及单调。语言错误很多，严重影响理解。 0分：所表达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关。自考/成考有疑问、不知道如何总结自考/成考考点内容、不清楚自考/成考报名当地政策，点击底部咨询官网，免费领取复习资料：
英语二大小作文，按照内容要点、语法词汇、连贯性等，分为五档：
第1档(A节9~10分，B节13~15分)
很好地完成了试题规定的任务，对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
(1) 包含所有内容要点;
(2) 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
(3) 语言自然流畅，基本没有语法错误;
(4) 有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰;
(5) 格式与语域恰当贴切。
第2档(A节7~8分，B节10~12分)
较好地完成了试题规定的任务，对目标读者产生了预期的效果。
(1) 包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉一两个次重点;
(2) 使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
(3) 语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误;
(4) 采用了适当的衔接手法，层次较清晰，组织较严密;
(5) 格式与语域恰当。
第3档(A节5~6分，B节7~9分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务，对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。
(1) 虽然漏掉了一些内容，但包含多数内容要点;
(2) 所使用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;
(3) 存在一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响整体理解;
(4) 采用了简单的衔接手法，内容基本连贯，层次基本清晰;
(5) 格式与语域基本合理。
第4档(A节3~4分，B节5~8分)
未能按要求完成试题规定的任务，未能清楚地传达信息给读者。
(1) 漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无关内容;
(2) 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;
(3) 有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解;
(4) 未能用恰当的衔接手法，内容缺少连贯性;
(5) 格式和语域不恰当。
第5档(A节0~2分，B节0~4分)
未完成试题规定的任务，未能传达信息给读者。
(1) 明显遗漏主要内容，且有许多不相关的内容;
(2) 语法和词汇项目使用单调、重复;
(3) 语法及词汇有许多错误，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运用能力差;
(4) 未采用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段;
(5) 无格式和语域概念。
作文写作方法
1、确定中心，写出深意。我们要着于挖掘所写事件中含有的生活哲理或找出它闪光的地方，反复思考，确定文章的中心思想。即善于从普通的小事中写出深意来。
2、文章的六要素要交待清楚。一件事情的发生，离不开时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过和结果这六方面，即常说的“六要素”，只有交待清楚这几方面，才能使读者对所叙述的事，有个清楚、全面的了解。
3、言之有序，条理要清楚。根据所述时间选择合理的顺序来安排材料。一般叙事顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种。
4、详略得当，突出重点。一般事件的材料有主次之分，能体现文章中心的材料是主要材料，这部分要详写，次要内容可略写或不写，主次分明，给读者以深刻的印象。
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