雅思考试写作家庭历史题

很多考生都被雅思写作这部分考试给难住了，对于马上就要参加雅思考试的同学来说，如果还没有完全准备充分的话，可以来看一下7月1日雅思写作考试真题与范文。 2021年7月1日雅思写作考试真题 小作文：欧洲各年龄段牛奶和黄油的摄入量 大作文：同意与否 Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ 大作文写作范文 For centuries libraries are in the service of man； these libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge known as books. Some people opine that we can do away with traditional libraries because technology has given us the facility of virtual or online libraries. I， however， believe that even though technology has reduced our need to go to the libraries， our traditional libraries can never become redundant. With the advent of new technologies in the field of computers and telecommunications， revolutionary changes have taken place in the feld of Library and Information Science. The shape of traditional libraries containing a large number of printed documents is in the process of being transformed into paper-less libraries containing a large number of digitized documents. The facilities offered by networking have not left libraries untouched. Modern libraries are not only digitized but networked also. This has led to the creation of virtual libraries， .， libraries without walls through which the user has access to information at any time， anywhere in the world， by using the modern tools of communications， such as computers and Internet facilities. However， one should keep in mind that a person goes to a library to search and get information from books and sit and study there. The library＇s ambiance and peaceful and scholarly atmosphere help one concentrate more on one＇s work and study. Thus， libraries will never become redundant. They will always be there to indicate the presence of a well-read and educated society. Another important point is that it is very difficult to always read books from the computer monitor. Traditional books can be issued from the library and read in the comfort of your bed. Virtual libraries can be accessed only by those who are computer literate. Access to virtual libraries can be affected by power cuts and network failures. Moreover， in a traditional library， you are guided by the librarians if you need any help in searching for the book. To put it in a nutshell， I pen down saying that advancement should be welcomed in every field， but the importance of the libraries for their fundamental role cannot be put aside. This tendency will add more crowns of success to the importance of libraries. 雅思写作细节须知 标点书写问题 按英文书写规定，标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注，与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。但是在实际作文中经常发现学生不论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待，即标点前后都空下空格，结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉，影响了文章的美感。 书写过于随意 每个人都有自己的书写习惯，但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的，所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外，肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集，以免让人看不清单词，影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群，从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大，也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l，r，n，m等混淆不清，造成考官阅卷障碍。 写作格式混乱 英文写作格式主要有齐头式和缩进式。通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行，所以会给人以整洁的感觉，也比较推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式相似，即每一段的开头句缩进，但是段落之间没有空行，所以不是很受欢迎。经常在作文中看到同学们用的是“齐头式+缩进式”，即段首句缩进+段落之间空行，给人以不伦不类的感觉，同学们一定要注意。 总结段缺失 很多学生在写作时因为时间不充裕无法写出总结段，于是给阅卷者没完成任务的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary，无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳，这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰，说服力不强等问题，即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。 分段过多或者过少 大家可以设想一下，当你拿着一篇只有一段的很长的文章时，是不是会有很晕的感觉？尤其是当我们的写作能力有限，文字表达没有吸引力时，怎么能让考官有耐心看完你的文章呢？再设想一下，当你看的文章分成很多的段落，而你的论证能力有限，费了半天劲也写不出几个句子，会不会每段都给人以流水账的感觉呢？ 如何提升雅思写作内容 你读过多少范文 雅思写作内容提升第一问：你读过多少范文？有的同学可能从开始备考雅思写作一直到考试都没完整地看过一篇范文，有的同学可能了解范文的重要性，不但看范文还将范文背诵下来。这其实是利用范文提升雅思写作的两个极端，不看范文当然不可以，但背诵范文其实也没有必要，所以学习范文的时候强调一个“读”字。 你背过多少词汇和句式 雅思写作内容提升第二问：你背过多少词汇和句式？缺乏积累也是影响写作内容的提升。如果我们在写雅思作文的时候经常发现所写内容不能完美表述自己想表达的意思，或者脑中已经想好内容，提笔却没有词汇句式可用，那就说明大家在写作方面的原始积累还不够，建议大家先去背一些雅思写作的高频词汇、短语和句式，等到有了一定的原始积累以后再去写作就会感觉顺手许多。 你是否还在随心所欲地写作 雅思写作内容提升第三问：你是否还在随心所欲地写作？写作过程中要按照雅思写作要求，回应题目，减少语法错误，保证内容充实语句段落连贯，还要注意写作字数达标。

家庭是我们的避风港，关于家庭的话题也是雅思君比较爱考的 作文 话题，下面我给大家带来关于家庭的雅思作文及解析。

雅思大作文家庭 生活类 话题 范文 --家庭和外界对孩子造成的影响

Task：A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?

思路解析：

1. 首先，家庭造成的影响不可小觑。毕竟父母是孩子生命当中的第一个老师，每天陪伴孩子们最长时间。举例，他们直接教会孩子们基本的生存技能，如语言，做饭，收拾屋子，卫生习惯，以及基本的学术能力，如数学计算，阅读，思考和判断。

2. 然而，其他因素同样有影响力。举例，在孩子们的学术 教育 上，学校的老师影响是第一位的。他们是学生教育的领路人，教会他们各个学科的基础知识，学习方式，以及培养他们对于某些学科的热爱。

3. 媒体同样对孩子们的影响很大。举例，电视和电影镜头中的暴力内容会扭曲孩子们的价值观，让他们变得富有侵略性，产生对于暴力的崇拜，并且错误地认为采用暴力手段解决问题是合适的。

参考范文：

The development of children depends on many factors, including parents, school education, media, peers and so forth. personally, I agree that the family is less influential than other aspects working together, and my reasons would be explored as below.

Admittedly, the influence of family on children is very deep, because parents, primary teachers in the life of children, set the first role models for them to learn and imitate, and which would be logged into the impressionable childhood mind and determine basic behaviors and thinking of them. For example, by observing and learning the daily activities of parents, like speaking, cooking and house cleaning, washing hands before eating, a child can master the language, self-care ability and hygienic habits. Besides, parents also play a key role in developing the intelligence of children. For instance, with day-to-day teaching, communication and storytelling, a parent can help a child to improve cognitive skills like basic mathematic calculation, memorizing, reading, and thinking and judging in a proper way.

However, I strongly believe outside-of-home elements make greater contributions to the overall growth of children. Firstly, in terms of academic education, teachers in school have priority over parents. For example, compared with some parent who have low-level or even no education, teachers are professionally educated and trained in formal university, and well-experienced in teaching. That is to say, school teachers are more advantageous and influential, in terms of comprehensively and accurately instructing, explaining and demonstrating common knowledge about laws of nature and universe, theories and formulas of math and physics, and events and people in history. What is more, forming social skills also relies on a school environment where children have opportunities to communicate, play and argue with other peers. This strong interpersonal interaction can make children proficient in real-world socialization.

Besides, mass media is another external factor affecting children’s development. For example, violent video on the Internet, TV programs and computer games are very likely to twist social values of the young audience, because children, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, with long-term exposure to ill information, children would be rude, aggressive and self eccentric. As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to school bullying.

In conclusion, when it comes to the importance in influencing children, other aspects like teachers in school and media override the parents, for the reasons that the formers have incomparable effects on the education, social skills and personalities of children.

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雅思大作文范文：家庭关系不紧密

社会类：

It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience. 家庭关系不紧密的原因和解决策略?

相关提问：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and 例如子女不回家看望父母family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 是否认为电视破坏了家庭和朋友间的交流?

老师思路拓展：

家庭关系不紧密的原因：

1. 生活节奏快，竞争激励，工作学习压力大没有时间和家人分享和交流。

2. 空间的隔离导致家庭关系的疏远， 职场 人士不断出差，年轻学子海外求学。

3. 家庭观念的淡化导致家庭关系的疏远：很多人不重视家庭，例如子女不回去看父母，年轻人轻易离婚，子女不赡养老人等。

家庭关系不紧密的解决：

1. 劳逸结合。

2. 个人重视家庭生活，积极增强家庭纽带。

3. 组织一些集体的家庭活动，例如交庭聚餐和家庭旅行;

老师原创语料库：

1. close family relationship = good family relationship = intimate family relationship n 良好的家庭关系

2. the decomposition of family bonds n 家庭纽带的分解

3. the distance / alienation of family relationship n 家庭关系的疏远

4. Alienation among family members is thus inevitable. 家庭成员关系疏远不可避免

5. fierce competition and heavy work pressure n激烈的竞争和繁重的工作压力

6. Modern people are too occupied to spare time for the family 人们过于忙碌，无暇顾及家庭。

7. change in public’s notion about the family n人们家庭观念的改变(需要细节例证展开)

8. Many newly married young person care less about the end of marriage, many children spend less and less time in accompanying their parents 很多年轻人不关注婚姻的稳定，很多子女不关心父母。

9. establish a reasonable balance between work schedule and the family v 维持家庭和事业的平衡

10. strengthen the family tie v加强家庭联系

11. To establish a reasonable balance between work schedule and the family life 在工作和家庭生活之间建立理性的平衡

12. family reunion n 家庭团聚

13. create harmonious family atmosphere and show respect for the old 营造和谐家庭氛围以及尊敬老人。

14. family trip and family meal n 家庭旅行和家庭聚餐

15. A close family relationship can surely be kept as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives and attach great importance to it. 只要认识到家庭关系的重要作用并且重视家庭，我们就可以保持亲密的家庭关系。

雅思大作文范文解析-家庭是否对孩子的发展影响最大

题目

Some people think that family is the most powerful influence on child's development. Other people, however, believe that other influences (such as television, friends and music etc.) influence more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

题型：双边讨论

翻译：有些人认为家庭对孩子的发展影响最大。 然而，其他人认为其他影响(如电视，朋友和音乐等)影响更大。讨论这两种观点并提出你的意见。

写作结构

开头段：背景介绍+观点讨论

主体段 1：(家庭因素对孩子发展影响大)理由+论证

主体段 2：(其他非家庭因素对孩子发展影响最大)理由+论证

结尾段：重申自己观点+提出理由

范文解析

开头段

交代背景“在关于 儿童 教育和发展的主题上，有人认为家庭扮演着最重要的角色，而其他人则认为其他因素，如电视，音乐和朋友，对孩子的发展更有影响力”，表示“对两种观点进行分析和解释”。

背景句：The topic concerning children’s education and development has provoked a heated debate over what factor influences a child’s growth most. Some people assert that family plays the most significant role, while others deem other factors, such as TV, music and friends, more influential in a child’s development.

观点讨论：In this essay, both opinions will be discussed and so will my personal view.

主体段 1

(家庭因素对孩子发展影响大)父母通常会与子女建立并保持亲密关系，直接创造环境来培养孩子的个性和习惯。经济状况，教育和专业背景对孩子的发展也有影响。

主题句：People who think that family is the most influential factor in a child’s upbringing may agree that parents usually establish and maintain an intimate relationship with their children, directly creating the environment to nurture a child’s personality and habits.

平行列举：Eloquent and sociable parents tend to pass on their energy and cheerfulness to their offspring, while parents with severe drinking problems might bring up children with alcoholism and aggressiveness. Besides, it is widely perceived that parents’ financial condition, educational and professional backgrounds, and even social connection will invariably benefit or limit a child’s choices and decisions on his education, occupation, personal preferences and social activities.

主体段 2

(其他非家庭因素对孩子发展影响最大)然而，有些人认为其他非家庭和外部因素，如媒体， 爱好 和友谊，对孩子的发展产生了更大的影响。

主题句：However, some people believe that other non-family and external factors, such as media, hobbies, and friendship exert a stronger impact on a child’s development.

平行列举：Those factors function in a way that is not replaceable by family education. Media such as the Internet and TV provide access to a huge amount of information and knowledge which are not always available from school work or bedtime stories. And those information enables children to have a better understanding of the world and themselves. Friends and peers, on the other hand, are the trusted confidants for a child to share his or her feelings, opinions and values which are not always understood or appreciated by family members.

结尾段

重申自己观点+提出理由：在我个人看来，家庭在孩子的整个一生中都拥有更持久和更深刻的力量。

In my personal opinion, family wields a more enduring and profound power in a child’s entire lifetime. As discussed previously, not only parents’ professional, educational and social backgrounds but also their attitude towards society and vision of life would always contribute to a child’s perspective and action. Parents with well-paid and socially recognized jobs may find it easier to provide financial assistance, intellectual guidance and social connection for their children to obtain better education and a brighter career prospect. When a child comes across troubles, family is always the first option to turn to since it offers unconditional mental and material support.

重点表达

play the most significant role 发挥最重要的作用

an relationship with 与...的关系

it is widely perceived that 人们普遍认为

find it easier to do... 发现做什么很容易

雅思7+大作文范文：社会家庭类话题

例题：

Today, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

范文

In recent decades, there has been gender convergence in terms of fathers taking on caregiving and mothers taking on breadwinning. The reasons are a bit more complex and mainly associated with a shift in gender roles and illness.

Firstly, equal rights movements can account for this change, and also have spoken for women to gain qualifications and pursue a career. As women are becoming more and more important in every way, they are ambitious for success and social recognition as much as males, then trying to split home and work tasks more evenly. When the fathers who were traditionally expected to be sole breadwinner see the change, they are then starting to convince themselves to accept it, which becomes a kind of self-reinforcing. Besides, illness may also lead to the trend. Commonly, stay-at-home fathers tend to be older than their counterparts, with the majority of them being 35 or even older. That is, having taken on the role of financial support for many years, they have suffered a lot, both mentally and physically, with illness and disability, such as having server insomnia or with a prosthetic, which forces them to make the decision.

I consider the change to be a positive trend. On the one hand, we should be optimistic to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities, and in which mothers are not put under stress to make sacrifices for their careers, especially after childbearing. It finally has become reasonable to make the decision on who works and who stays depending on the personal preference and based on who can earn the most money. On the other, it also seems fair enough that men are given the chance to leave their jobs and shoulder childcare responsibilities. In this case, they can become more involved in the life of their children, attending the meeting with teachers in school and going camping to explore the nature. Then, it will sharpen a child’s good personalities and characters that mothers cannot help with.

In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women are a result of merging trend in society, and I believe this trend has a positive effect on the family as well as their children.

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