雅思考试小作文线型图范文

话题：

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

参考范文：

The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000.

In each of these years, the US produced more waste than Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland and Portugal combined. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000.

Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.

The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.

话题：

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.

参考范文：

The table compares the numbers of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2001 and 2011.

Overall, the number of UK commuters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years.

In 2001, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling commuters in each year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table.

Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total numbers of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,768 in 2011. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years.

雅思作文技巧推荐

首先，我们来介绍一下雅思写作考试的'基本内容吧。

雅思写作考试分为Academic和General Training两类

雅思写作考试包括两篇作文题目，Task 1和Task 2，前一篇150字，后一篇250字。原则上建议考生前一篇作文用20分钟，后一篇用40分钟，因为后一篇文章分值更高。

雅思A类写作部分，全部1小时时间，分2大单元(Task 1&Task 2);

(Task 1)通常考题以图片、表格坐标、曲线图为基本形式，考生根据所给的资料，写出150个字以上的文章来叙述主题，组织并探讨主题，提出比较支持的论点。

雅思G类的(Task 1)考生多以写一封信来应对考题中所给予的模拟状况或问题。

(Task 2)A类与G类非常类似，考生就考题的主题，用250字详加发表意见，通常考生被要求用几种方式之一来做为架构解决问题、表达自己的意见、支持或争辩考题所给予的讯息。

在雅思写作考试备考中，对考生最基本的要求是：

1.考生需将雅思写作写在答卷上，别小看这一点，有很多考生因为紧张等原因，直接写在试卷上，是不能拿分的。

2.考生的雅思写作字数如果达不到最低要求将被扣分。

3.考生的雅思写作文章内容如果被考官认定是偏题或者跑题将被扣分。

4.雅思写作考试中，任何抄袭(如抄袭其他来源的内容)的作文将被重扣。

5.雅思写作文章如果不完整、内容相互没有关联将被扣分(如在任何部分使用点句或笔记形式)。

描写程度appreciably adv. 显著地，可观的 He’s looking appreciably adv 显著地markedly adv 显著地remarkably adv 显著地considerably adv. 可观的 The percentage is considerably higher than …gradually adv 缓慢地 gradual adj. 缓慢的 gradually declineroughly adv. 粗糙地、大略地、大概地 The percentage is roughly at 7%.rough adj. 粗糙的、大略的、大概的slight adj. 轻微的 a slight slip, error, change, improvementSlightly adv. 轻微地、微小地 The patient is slightly better todaymoderate adj. 适中的、稳健的、温和的 moderate price increasesmoderately adv. 适度地; 不过分地 marginal adj.轻微的、边缘的、不重要的、微小的 a marginal difference between ….Substantial adj. 数目大的; 可观的、显著的 a substantial improvement, decreasedramatically adv.巨大的、夸张的、引人注目的 Her attitude changed adj.戏剧的、夸张的、巨大的Obviously adj. 明显地 He was obviously adj大约的，近似的 an approximate price, figure, amount, etcapproximately adv.大约地，近似地 = roughlytwice, three times adv. 两倍 三倍discrepant adj.有差异的，有矛盾的，不一致的 =differentintermediate adj.中间的,介于两者之间,中等的 at an intermediate point, level, stageoutnumber vt. 在数量上超过The demonstrators were outnumbered by the policespecifically adv.特别地respectively adv.分别地描写变化趋势diminish v. 使减少 His strength has diminished over the v. 减少，下降，衰退 n.衰落 降低 a declining birth-rate reduce v. 减少，下降n.减少 increase profits by reducing costs reduction n. 减少decrease v. 变小或变少; 减少n.减少 Student numbers have decreased by adj. adv. 下降，减少，恶化 a downward trend in pricescurtail v.减少 削减（开支、花费）缩短（时间、假期）等 We must try to curtail our spendingcurtailment n. 缩短; 减少; 削减fluctuate v. 涨落、波动 The price fluctuates between 5 and n. 波动、变化 wide fluctuations of temperatureshack n. 震荡、波动stationary adj. 静止的，不动的 a stationary phase of this curve 静止不动期dwindle v. 逐渐变少或变小; 减少; 缩小 dwindling hopes, popularity, profitsmount v. （数量、密度）上升、增加 The death toll mounted to v. 增多, 增加 Our problems have multiplied since last v. 上升; 升高 Ascending trend上升趋势upward adj., adv 上升，升高 the upward trend in pricesincrease v.增加, 增大（数目数量）n.增长The rate of inflation has increased by 2%.steadily adv.稳定，保持不变 remain steadily at 1000 for 2 yearstriple v.变成三倍 The figure has v.变成两倍 The price of houses has virtually doubled over the past few adv.持续地固定用法：In terms of… 就。。。方面来说 Think of it in terms of an come …, 下一个说说。。。 Next come Guangzhou, it’s a smaller city than Beijingstay constantly at … 保持稳定在。。。。The correlation between A and B A和B的相互联系According to the survey in 2004, the tendency of… can be observed from the graph above 被动语态开篇句remain beneath … 保持在。。。以下climbing up to… 攀升到。。。during this stage/period 在此期间As for…, 对于。。。来说，说到。。。 As for Japan, the situation may be more serious常用名词bar chart 柱状图 = histogram n.直方图pie chart 饼状图 flow chart n.流程图 diagram 图示、图解、图片 illustration n.图示 图解 示意图curve 曲线图 = graph n.图表，曲线图proportion n.比例，百分比 = share n.份额 比例 分享 股份top, Peak n. 顶点 bottom, hemline n.底点，最小值maximum n.最大值 minimum n.最小值trend n.趋势 = tendency n.趋势 inclination n.趋向，趋势 He has an inclination to be fatdiscrepancy n.差异，不一致 =differencebreakdown= statistical analysis n统计分析,详细分析the table gives a breakdown of amount of expenditures counterpart n.对应的另一方，比较的另一方 this product is better than its counterparts小作文写作要点：对于数据描述性的题，需要在内容中体现的有： 最大值，最小值，相同值，相异值，增加值，减少值，和两个图标的相互关系对于趋势描述性的题，需要在写作中体现的有： 上升，下降，波动，稳定，峰值，谷值，交点，倍数，和两个曲线的相互关系值得注意的是写作线索，例如一个图表，是关于不同年度房子价钱的不同，你到底应该按照价钱为叙事主线叙述，还是年度为叙事主线？选好主线小作文成功了一半。 我刚开始小作文有的写的不错，有的感觉很冗长，为什么?就是因为写作线索没选好，这里告诉大家：选择写作线索，应应该以数据少的东西作为写作线索，例如，一个柱状图，两个年份2000 2006年，每个年份三个房价，分别是公寓、别墅、茅草屋的价钱。这时候就应该以年份为写作线索。先写，2000年3个房价分别多少，然后再写2006年3个房价多少。再举例，如果是三个年份，两个房价分别是别墅价钱，公寓价钱，那么应该以房屋价钱为线索，先写别墅多少，3年趋势如何，再写公寓价钱多少，三年趋势如何。 明白了不？

雅思写作除了需要积累一定的词汇量之外，还需要同学们掌握写作思路，如流程图的技巧，来辅助我们更好地完成小作文写作。

关于流程图有如下的四点大家需要掌握：

1. 表述顺序的词

2. 主动语态及被动语态的选择

3. 总分总的写作形式

4. 把简单句变为复杂句的方法

下面具体和大家介绍下这四点如何应用到雅思小作文流程图中，

1.表述顺序的词

流程图从它的名字可以看出， 整个图形是强调某种事物的形成过程。 因此在流程图中， 顺序词很重要， 它们是衔接整篇文章的框架的核心。这里和大家介绍下， 在流程写作中可以用到的顺序性词汇：

process starts from doing…

…is the first step/ stage / phase.

the beginning of …

the first/initial stage, + 句子 – at the packaging stage, + 句子

此处的at the packaging stage实际为at the first stage的变形， 通过用packaging来代替firstly，使得对阶段的描述更加精准。

that/ followed by/ before +doing

life cycle begins again.

此句选自C6T3范文， 当时文章表述的是飞蛾产卵的过程。 整个过程分析后发现是一个再次循环的状态，因此可在顺序结尾处带入此句。

2.主动语态及被动语态的选择

C8T3水泥和混凝土的制作属于工业生产制作图，在描述过程中， 动作更为重要， 因此要采用主动语态。 而C6T3的飞蛾产卵的流程图中， 动作的主体即飞蛾也是描述的要点，因此要用主动语态。

总结来说， 工业生产为主动语态。 自然界生命周期图为被动语态。

3.总分总的写作形式

开头段：According to the diagram , the process of cement production can be divided into four steps.

结尾段：Overall, cement production consists of four stages, starting from crushing materials into powder and ending at bagging cement.

此处的开头与结尾段以C8T3为题，开头强调了水泥制作可分为四个步骤。 这里的分为四个步骤即我们所说的总述，主体段的一步至第二部是分述，特点1已经强调过怎么描写步骤， 这里不在赘述。看下结尾。 水泥制作分为四部，以…开始，并以…结束。 前后呼应做的恰到好处， 大家后期可仿写单横线的句式。

4.把简单句变为复杂句的方法

很多考生反馈在流程写作过程中， 全部都是流水账， 句子过于简单没有变化。 但如果掌握了以下的两种方法的话， 可以轻松把两个简单句改为高级句式：

a. 分词结构(before +doing)

(1)Powder is placed on the conveyor belt.

(2) Powder is ground by the grinder.

Power is placed on the conveyor belt, before being ground by the grinder.

b. 状语从句(once， until)

Ingredients are rotated in the concrete mixer, until they are turned into concrete.

Once ingredients are rotated in the concrete mixer, they are turned into concrete.

图表作文是极其可以事先准备的你先吧描写变化趋势的相关单词过一遍 然后开头 过度 结尾 自己参照比较好的范文做一个你自己的模板 每种类型做一个就行了。。。其实图表作文 基本上就是线图 和饼图 两大块 柱状图基本和线图差不多的TABLE的那种比较麻烦 要你自己找出可比性

北外雅思学院老师为您解答：雅思A类图表作文题写作精华提炼分析精华雅思写作技巧.数据图： 一、介绍段introduction：介绍段内容几乎完全不用创新，就是对题目文字部分的第二段做改写，paraphrase therubric。所谓改写，要么换词，要么换句式。例如：(I4-100) The charts below give information about travel to and from theUK and most (1) (2) popular countries for UK residents to visit.换词(1)图 The charts图：chart, graph, diagram(雅思写作中完全等价，无差别)线：line / curve chart柱图：bar / column graph饼：pie diagram表：table / statistics / figures(2)动词“表明”give information about介绍段是客观描述，用一般现在时态，give informationabout虽然在这篇作文中最好不再用，但是informallearning，随手学到的东东，留作其它文章再用。替换的词语和结构很多，比如我常用的reveal / indicate /demonstrate，大家也可以选几个自己喜欢并且拼写准确的形成风格，年轻时多尝试，年纪大了就要形成风格啦，三个就够，多了白搭，还是那句话，博大不如精深。第二段其余部分的替换因题而异，比如travel换成visit，theUK换成Britain(注意不是England，英格兰只是Britain的一部分)，popular换成fashionable，country换成nation，UKresidents to visit换成UKtourists。不过随着练习作文数量的增加，你会惊喜的发现，雅思图表作文，连描述的对象都是类似的。最后要注意点细节，原文的“below”应省略，因为答题纸上没有图；而第二副图上标注的1999年，可以补充进介绍段。对担心写不足词数的单图作文，甚至还可以“猥琐”的把特征点概括成一句话加入介绍段。换句：(1)并列句：The line chart reveals that … and the bar graph indicates that…(分别描述两幅图，形成风格哦，第一幅图用chart，第二副图用graph，第一幅图reveal，第二副图indicate，也许你写的所有文章都类似，但考官只有机会欣赏一篇啊。)(2)被动语态：… is revealed in the line chart and … is indicated in the possible answer:The line chart reveals visits to and from Britain and the bargraph indicates most fashionable nations for UK tourists in1999.二、主体段body：过渡：段首过渡词(1个)信息出处：According to the line chart,As is shown in the line chart,The line chart shows that …表示逻辑：On the other hand等等段内过渡词(1-2个)顺承：also, besides, in addition转折：however, on the other hand, conversely其它：meanwhile / in the same time, similarly, in particular

你好， 雅思写作考试中的图表作文语言很大程度要依赖于图表的形式，然而，掌握了图表题的特定语言并不能保证写作任务的完成，更不能等同于高分作文。想要取得雅思小作文的高分就取决于图标描述的逻辑结构上，今天为大家整理了雅思高分图标写作范文，供同学们参考。The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown