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一、相同点:1、两者都是客观陈述既给信息,不要加入作者的主观意图。雅思task1中要求“Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.”与新托福integrated task中的“Summarize the points in the listening passage and explain how they relate to specific points in the reading passage.” 如出一辙。两类习作都要求作者就题论题而不是借题发挥。2、两者都相对简单。两者都是可以在一定时间的训练后模版化,从而即便你听不懂、看不懂文中的信息,仍然是可以有所写的。3、两者都是在整场作文考试中占小部分成绩份额。换句话说,两者都是你取得好成绩的必要但非充分条件。4、两者对于中国学生来所都有难度。前者难在中国学生很少对数字进行独立分析,后者难在中国学生的边听边归纳的能力偏弱。二、不同点:1、两者评分的侧重点不同雅思小作文中有条理、重点突出、语法(比如时态)正确等为评分依据而新托福中更关注的是信息的完整与否以及整篇文章的信息是否、两者的呈现形式完全不同。雅思task1的所有题目都呈现在试卷上,作者只要能看懂题甚至有时候连题目都没太看懂就能进行写作。与之呈鲜明对比的是,新托福integrated task的题目是以一段听力lecture和阅读paragraph的组合来出题的。如果作者想把听力中的内容与阅读中的内容建立有效的关系,那么就必须听懂至少是听力中的要点部分,也就是说新托福的integrated task已不再是单纯地考你的写作能力,还考到了你的听力。这对于中国学生来说恐怕是当头一棒,本来写作就是我们的薄弱项,再加入听力那可是难上加难啊。3、两者的考查点不同。雅思的task1与生活更接近一些,我们经常在经济类杂志或者新闻中听到模板。比如股市情况通报,产量信息公布,政府正式的年终总结报告等。而后者则更像是两个打对抗赛的球队,点点相对,时时相对,你需要的是看懂这场比赛,并以一个中立者的身份总结这场比赛。雅思小作文的最高境界是让考官看到作文就能在脑海中勾勒出曲线走势、表格特点等,而新托福则更注重作者能用一篇习作让读者看到两种观点对抗。4、两者的respond方式不同。前者为参照客观信息客观描述信息---多为对数字、流程等客观信息的描述,而后者则是参照主观信息客观描述两种完全对立的观点的联系。个人认为,后者对于中国学生来说是比较容易提高的。因为只要你能听得懂记得下听力中的3个主要观点,并记住一两个例子,那么剩下的工作就是将阅读中的信息paraphrase一下,与所听内容relate 一下而已。5、两者的答题时间不同雅思大小作文只要在60分钟内完成即可,做题顺序由考生自己来决定。通常情况下,老师都指导学生先保住大作文,后写小作文。也就是说考生有主动权去做合理的取舍。但是新托福因为是机考,所以考生很大程度上是computer-controlled, 包括时间进度考生也是受控于计算机的(20分钟写作时间)。6、两者考查的细致程度不同。雅思task1中更注重细节信息的描述,更注重通过数字做比较,而新托福的integrated task则需要用文字去对比。大家知道,在雅思第一部分中,数字+专用词汇(比如表趋势的词汇、表顺序的词汇等)就可以搞定作文,但是后者则很少借助固定的词汇,也就是说随意性更大一些。两者考查点不同。雅思与新托福在写作方面既有一些相同之处,但在很多细节上又是差异很大的。建议有过考雅思经历的考生在学习时一定要注意到这些不同,知道如何去应对。能够更加有针对性的进行应对。提高备考和考试的效率。

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怎么写好雅思大作文开头段 万事开头难,很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态,大多情况下可能会胡乱写作,甚至抄题,这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳,导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此,快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下环球雅思将为考生们总结一下怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的两大要素,供考生们参考。 写好雅思大作文开头段要素一:现象句雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。E.g.1Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount ofE.g.2Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. 写好雅思大作文开头段总结——主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or sevenE.g.3In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——主被动之间的转换,以及同义替换:finish high school = graduate from high school所以,从上文中可以看出,一般来说,现象句会在最开始加上一个套句,并且加上地点和时间。雅思大作文开头段经典套句:1.It is true that......是真实的2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…3.It is quite common… …是常见的4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的地点:in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place时间:in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays写好雅思大作文开头段要素二:点到问题雅思大作文考题分成两种:report & argumentative。对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)E.g.4In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来,全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。E.g.5Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点,把造成这个现象的原因大致导出,与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。对于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion.; is it a positive or negative development?),这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点,所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。E.g.6Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.Do you agree or disagree?I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——改写题目+主动变被动:have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by直接表达自己的观点:I tend to agree thatE.g.7Some people feel that entertainers (e.g.film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid?I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid.This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.写好雅思大作文开头段总结——现象+观点E.g.8Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective?There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere.Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.总之,如果要写出一篇较好的雅思作文,环球托福建议考生们在雅思大作文开头段落的描写方面绝对要达到快速和准确这两个要求,把时间控制在5分钟之内,把字数把握在30-40个单词之间。以上就是本次环球雅思为大家搜集整理的怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的方法介绍和例题分析,希望能够帮助到大家,最后,环球雅思预祝各位考试顺利!

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豪廷布艺

是可以的 但是还是要买一本托福书 练习一下啊

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在托福写作中积累 好词好句 很重要,如果托福 作文 中能把基础的词汇学到精通,也能让作文精彩纷呈。托福考生要背单词扩大词汇量,也需要改进对现有词汇的运用能力,让托福写作更上一层楼。下面我给大家带来托福写作好 句子 积累。

托福写作五种必备高分句型

一、开头段

1. with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard 随着人民生活水平的显著提高

2. In contemporary society, it is becoming increasingly common that people+直观的现象(通过从句表达),或for some people(可以细化具体的参与者)to do sth题目中的中心事件,which has aroused deep social concern.

二、正面影响

1. A exert/have/bring about/exercises

an undeniably

beneficial/positive/far-reaching/favorable

detrimental/negative/adverse/harmful

influence/effect/impact on B.

2. A lays a solid foundation for B.

3. A plays a /significant/indispensable/decisive/fundamental/crucial/irreplaceable role in B.

A is of vital importance to B

三、增加 文章 复杂度

复述原题+指出其复杂性+表明自己的立场

1. The topic/ issue of whether S +V +O as/since/ in that it originates from/ comes from sth.

2. The problem of sth. is no longer restricted within sth. but more severe in the aspect of sth.

四、表示原因

1. There are three reasons for this.

2. The reasons for this are as follows.

3. The reason for this is obvious.

4. The reason for this is not far to seek.

5. The reason for this is that...

五、结尾

1. From what has been discussed above,we may safely drawthe conclusion that......

summary, it is wiser......

六、展望未来

1. Only in this way can we have a better and brighter future.(此处必须用倒装句一定记住)

2. Just imagine how great the world would be if only we…

3. I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we can …

托福写作十大高分句型盘点

01

定语从句

这应该算是写作中最常用的一种句型之一。适当地运用定语从句可以给你的文章增色不少。

例:Bad books contain evil thoughts. In them, there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex.

→ Bad books, in which there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex, contain evil thoughts.

02

状语从句

在写作当中运用的最多的是以下五种状语从句,即原因状语从句,让步状语从句,条件状语从句,时间状语从句和目的状语从句。

1. 原因状语从句:常由because, as, since和for引导

例: Nonetheless, I am still in favor of space travel, for its merits far outweigh demerits.

尽管如此,我还是赞成太空探险,因为它的好处远远大于坏处。

2. 让步状语从句:常由although, though, even though/ if, as long as和notwithstanding引导

例: Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明 教育 能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

3. 条件状语从句:常由if, on the condition that和providing that引导

例: If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.

假如你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志,你必须努力工作、艰苦奋斗、准备好条件。

4. 时间状语从句:常由when和while引导

例: When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

5. 目的状语从句: 常由so that和in order that引导

例: Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.

成千上万的人们不得不花费的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识,使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。

03

宾语从句

例1: Some people claim that government should be mainly responsible for the environmental pollution.

一些人认为政府应对环境污染负主要责任。

例2: Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.

许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果,无法避免。

04

同位语从句

例1: It is an undeniable fact that environmental pollution becomes increasingly serious.

环境污染变得越来越严重是不可否认的事实。

例2: No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.

没有人能否认这一基本事实:对于一般工人来讲,轻松掌握这些技术是不可能的。

05

主语从句

例1: What has caught our attention is /It is noticeable that the environment in both the rural and urban areas is deteriorating.

值得注意的是农村和城市的生态环境都在不断恶化。

例2: It is universally acknowledged that environmental pollution becomes one of the most serious problems in China or even the world as a whole.

众所周知,环境污染问题是中国乃至世界面临的最为严重的问题之一。

06

强调句

It is + 被强调的内容 + that

例: It is cars and factories that release a great deal of gases, polluting the environment.

汽车和工厂排放大量的废气,使得环境被污染。

07

倒装句

例: Only if the government take some appropriate measures, will this intractable problem be tackled.

只有政府采取适当的 措施 ,这个棘手的问题才能被解决。

08

被动语态

例: Every means should be tried to protect the environment on which people live.

人们应竭尽全力来保护我们赖以生存的环境。

09

分词结构

包括现在分词和过去分词。

例1: Tourism, which is a rising industry, has become the major source of economy, playing crucial role in many Asian countries.

旅游业是一个新兴的行业,它成为经济的主要, 在很多东南亚国家起着尤为重要的作用。

例2: To be more specific, government should stage some relevant laws or regulations to severely punish the factory producing a great number of pollutants and the people littering or spitting deliberately.

具体来说,政府应该出台相关法律法规对制造大量污染物的工厂及故意乱扔垃圾随地吐痰的人进行严惩。

10

插入语

一种独立成分,与句子的 其它 成分一般没有语法上的关系,大都是对一句话作一些附加说明或解释。它通常由一个词、一个 短语 或一个句子构成,位置较为灵活,可置于句首、句中或句末,一般用逗号或破折号与句子隔开。

例1: Computer, an indispensable part in our life, has brought us great conveniences.

电脑,我们生活中必不可少的一部分,给我们带来了极大的方便。

例2: College students, lacking social experience, are easily cheated.

大学生,没有社会 经验 ,容易上当。

巧妙修改句首的托福作文精彩句型赏析

句首发生变化:

1.主语不是人称(非灵主语)

His name slips my mind.

A good idea suddenly occurred to me.

2.句前用副词或介词短语

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills.

In reality, there is no conclusive evidence that human activity has any effect on the Earth's surface temperature.

3.用it作形式主语

It is disturbing to think that a dangerous wild animal is still at large in the quiet countryside.

4.句首用分词短语或todo

Acting on a sudden impulse, I collected several dozen, put them in a paper bag, and took them to Robert.

To boost creative thinking, students need to explore in the nature.

解析:通过句首发生的一些变化,让你的托福句式更接近本土人的 思维方式 和表达方式。

练习:

根据以上规则,来表达自己的想法,各造一个句子,思考一下托福作文中如何,何时使用这种规则。

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柠檬草的味道11

通常作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面的内容:1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon。2)一些人的观点(some people’s opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排。3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。雅思大作文的总字数有最低的要求,即250字,这250字大家一定要合理的分配布局,第一段最好是写3-5句话就ok了,而且小编在这里提醒大家,雅思写作好的开头千万不要在首段就把所有的话都说完。雅思写作好的开头方式通常有一下几种情况:1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做:主动语态<=>被动语态主谓宾<=>主系表某些近义词互换Example:At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practicalcourses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下我们有2种开首方式来保证字数,这也是比较好的雅思写作好的开头。把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。Example:International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比。Example:International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentumand has become a big industry. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息。这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。Example:The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?→In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。除此之外,考生在雅思写作首段的时候千万不要范语法和拼写等低级错误,这会给阅卷老师留下很糟糕的印象,同时也会影响阅卷老师对文章内容的理解。

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