成人自考本科英文作文模板

1、利弊分析型作文模板：

思路：1、描述现象 2、介绍观点（第二段，利；第三段，弊）3、作者观点/结论？

2、图表型作文模版：

思路 第一段，结合图表，将图表的信息描述清楚，点出主题。

第二段，围绕主题展开讨论，分析原因。

第三段，结合上段讨论，发表自己针对这种现象的评论，说明危害，重申自己观。

作文取高分难，但拿到个相对高的分数还是不太难的，特别是作文拿到20分以上应该说比较容易。参考以往考生经验（主要感谢一下论坛老人“金翅膀”），自己总结加工了几类模板，水平不高，主要为大家开阔思路、提供一个参考，表见笑。

大家用模板的时候总担心与别人雷同，如果单纯背诵抄袭模板那就太低级了。模板主要为我们提供框架和行文思路，首先，根据题目我们要能知道大概结构和一些标志性语句；其次，要给模板赋予自己的个性，这样作文既写得还不错，也不会雷同了。图画类作文图片类型有单图片（双图片）说明和双图片对比说明。我根据自己的想法，进行了以下简单分类，几种不同类型的作文模板，各有不同组织框架，根据框架行文风格可分为：

对比类：对同一事物的不同选择；面对困难、机遇、责任、失败、追求 批判类：对社会不好现象的批评；污染、浪费、交通、抄袭、啃老、食品 议论类：对社会热点问题的议论；网友、崇拜、就业、网络、中西文化 正气类：弘扬社会正气，高尚品德等。

开头部分： How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 结尾部分： With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Please come on time and don’t be late. 结束语部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope you’ll have a nice time here. That’s all. Thank you. 三、议论文模板 1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入： 第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... （导入话题） Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧） 正文： 第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点） Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由) 第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. （反方观点） Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由) 结论： 第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（个人观点） オ 2.“A或者B”类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段： Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages. 正文： 第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因) 第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势) 结论： 第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ 3.观点论述类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题 As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对） The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下） 正文： 第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由) 结论： 第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... （照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构） 4."How to"类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题 正文： 第2段： Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法) 结论： 第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法) 四、图表作文写作模板 The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明). We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化， the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议). 五、图画类写作模板：1.开头 Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture... 2.衔接句 As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3.结尾句 In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

英语二是很多自考本科考生必考科目，作文在这门课程中占非常重要的作用，给大家分享一些英语作文模板和一些优秀范文，考生多记忆一些范文可以帮助考生在考场超常发挥。自考英语二模板汇总一、解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1．问题现状 2．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, (说明A的现状)．Second, (举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, (解决方法一). For another （解决方法二). Finally, 解决方法三).Personally, I believe that (我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because (带来的好处).二、对比选择型作文模板When it comes to ＿＿＿＿ ,different people hold different views . Some contend that＿＿＿＿. For one thing,＿＿＿＿ .For another,＿＿＿ .In spite of all these claims, others maintain that ＿＿＿＿，They point out that＿＿＿＿ .Another instance often cited is that＿＿＿＿ . It’s no easy task to find a satisfactory answer to the issue. As for me, there’s some truth to both arguments .It’s advisable to ＿＿＿＿＿＿.三、对比观点题型（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1．有一些人认为 2．另一些人认为 3．我的看法。。。The topic of （主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of （支持A的理由一）What is more, 理由二). Moreover, (理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),(理由三).From my point of view, I think （我的观点）. The reason is that (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .四、现象解释型作文模板：Recently, ＿＿＿＿What amazes us most is＿＿＿＿＿．It is true that ＿＿＿＿＿. There are many reasons explaining ＿＿＿＿．The main reason is＿＿＿＿＿，What is more, ＿＿＿＿＿，Thirdly, ＿＿＿＿＿．As a result, ＿＿＿＿＿． Considering all these, ＿＿＿．For one thing, ＿＿＿For another, ＿＿＿．In conclusion, ＿＿＿＿自学考试英语优秀作文1、 失败是常有的事。.2、人们对失败有各种不同的态度。3、我对失败的态度。 Is Failure a Bad Thing?Failure is a common thing in our daily life. For example, sometimes we fail to pass the examinations. On other occasions, we are defeated in sport games. And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work. So it is safe to say that every one of us must have encountered failure of one kind or another.However, different people have different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart when they come across failures. They seem to think that it is the end of the world. Others, on the contrary, don’t take failure seriously. They seem to think that failure is first step to success. In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but our attitude towards it. If we are afraid of failure and yield to it easily, we are bound to have one failure after another. But as long as we have confidence in ourselves and learn something from failure, we’ll certainly go from victory to victory. So I’m never afraid of failure, or I firmly believe that “failure is the mother of success.”2、 竞争是当今社会的普遍想象。竞争和合作经常并存。在提倡竞争的同时我们不要忘了合作。Competition and CooperationCompetition is a very common phenomenon in our social life today. We compete when we play games, we try to do better than others in our study and there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so forth. We can say, to some extent, competition is one of the motive force of the development of society.We often find competition and cooperation occurring at the same time. Think of a basketball game. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. In most cases, we can’t compete without cooperation. Thus they are equally important.While advocating competition, we can’t forget cooperation. In modern society, cooperation is especially important because most work is fulfilled with and through other people. So we must combine competition with cooperation to obtain our goals.3、城市无论大小都应该保持清洁。保持城市清洁不是一件容易的事。为了保持城市的清洁，我们的政府做了大量的工作。Keep Our City CleanA city, whether small or big, should be kept clean. A clean environment will do us much good. Without the clean environment, we can hardly keep fit, work efficiently or live a comfortable life, which will greatly hold back the development of the city. So it’s of great importance to keep our city clean.Moreover, keeping the city clean is not an easy job. We can clean up the city and keep it clean temporarily, but can we keep it clean for good? This arduous work is in close relation to the economy of the city, the government policy and citizens’ qualities. It demands permanent efforts and scientific measures and right attitudes. In order to keep the city clean, our government has taken a greatmany steps, which includes proper investment, making plans and regulations, the disposal of rubbish, the forestation, and the layout of gardens and flower beds and lawns. We can expect a clean and beautiful city as long s all of us do what we should under the leadership of the government.4、目前环保还存在着许多问题。为了保护环境，各国政府做了大量的工作。我的看法。Protection of EnvironmentThere are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One o the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. The polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What’s more, vegetation has been greatly reduced with rapid growth of modern cities.To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environment protection today.In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environment protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population. Finally’ those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.5、 现代社会广告已经充斥了生活的每个角落；和任何其他事物一样，广告也有两面性；因此，面对广告我们得小心，以免上当。The Effects of AdvertisementAs one of the products of modern society, advertisement has filled almost every corner of the world. We are exposed to them anywhere and anytime. When we listen to the radio or watch TV, the programs are broken up by advertisements that flash on every five or ten minutes. Walking in the street, we find we confronted with endless ad bulletins. Every evening, especially weekend evenings, we find out mailbox full of ad leaflets. With their tremendous power and attractive, advertisements have become a part of our life.Every coin has two sides, so does advertisement. Advertisement exerts both positive and negative effects upon our life. In order to promote trade, business people engage in making their products known to the public in the most attractive ways so that potential customers find it easier to choose what they are to purchase when faced with shelves of goods in the supermarkets. However, advertisements are not always reliable, as some dishonest businessmen exaggerate the functions and qualities of their products. Customers may bemisled and deceived. Such is often the case, and it does harm the interests of the customers.Thus, when confronted with an advertisement, we have to be very cautious so as not to be taken in by appealing words and pictures in it. We should remember that advertisements are good at playing with words. What customers should do is to ask about the product and try it, if possible, before purchasing it.6、How to Succeed in a Job Interview 1.面试在求职过程中的作用；2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是。A job interview is indispensable in the process of job hunting. If a job seeker can make the best use of the interview and leave a good impression on the interviewer’s mind, he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicants. If, on the other hand, the job hunter gives a poor performance during the interview, he is unlikely to stand a chance to succeed. To be successful in a job interview, the job hunter should demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.First, the applicant ought to attach much importance to his appearance and manner of speaking. Second, he is supposed to display his ability, especially his grasp of professional knowledge required by the position for which he is applying. Finally, a really impressive job seeker must convey a sense of self-confidence in and a practical attitude toward the cause concerned. If the interviewee succeeds in displaying these characteristics and presents his most attractive qualities during an interview, the interviewer might make an on-the-spot decision to take him on.7、 Is It Good for College Students to Have Part-time Jobs（大学生做兼职好吗？） 1、The advantages of having part-time jobs fro college students. （利） 2、The disadvantages of having part-time jobs for college students.（弊） 3、The right attitudes.There are many advantages for college students to take part-time jobs while they are at college. Firstly, part-time jobs will offer us students a chance to demonstrate our ability and to apply what we have learned at college. Secondly, part-time jobs help us become more independent of our families. Thirdly, the experience we gain through part-time jobs may be of great help to our future career. Finally, part-time jobs can broaden our horizon and make our life more meaningful. However, a part-time job has some disadvantages. For example, we may lose time needed for sleep, rest, study, club activities and recreation. For another example, if we take part-time jobs, it is likely for us to be so interested in thework that we can’t pay attention to our study. As a result, we may fail in our school study, which will affect our future career too. In my opinion, as a student we should hold the right attitude towards the part-time job, for acquiring knowledge, especially more book knowledge, is our first important task. Although part-time jobs can do us some good in some aspects, we should pay more attention to school study than on it.8、网络时代已经到来。网络影响我们的生活。充分利用网络资源,享受生活。 Internet and our life（网络和我们的生活）We are now living in an internet society. It seems that we are overwhelmed in the internet life. Newspapers are talking that the internet age has come.Everything in our daily life can have relationship with internet: in the morning, we may turn on the computer to check whether we have E-mails from friends of abroad; then we can read some latest news from any websites in the world. To the internet users, there is no borders between nations. People can contact their friends wherever they are, as long as they are connected to the internet. After a day’s work, you may connect to the internet and do some shopping. Internet makes our lives easy and convenient. So why don’t we turn on the computer and send a birthday card to our father? 作文九： Reading Selectively or Extensively9、有人认为读书要有选择. 有人认为应道博览群书，我的看法How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books, and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree. They emphasize that today’s society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he’ll have more chances to succeed. If a man knows in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively. Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields and read selectively in one field.10、关于财富与幸福/健康与财富的作文Wealth brings happinessDirections: In this part, you are to write an essay entitled “The Relationship between Wealth and Happiness”. You can agree or disagree, completely or partially to the above statement. But whatever position you take, you should give sound supporting reasons. At the end of your composition you are required to draw your own conclusion.Wealth has always been what some people long for. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. Their efforts contribute to the welfare of the society and at the same time to the accumulation of their wealth, and hence to their happiness.报考考试有疑问、不知道如何考点内容、不清楚报考考试当地政策，点击底部咨询猎考网，免费获取个人学历提升方案：

模板一：图画作文This illustration depicts_________ (图画中的人物)V-ing, with______________(补充说明). Recently it has become common for people in many ways of life to_____________(进一步阐释)It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明). He seems to be saying that_____________(给出细节). In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述).This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体，如the whole of the human race). Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to ___________(问题所在). One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一). It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明). On the other hand, _______________(建议二). Only in this way can we___________(展望前景).模板二：图表作文The chart gives us an overall picture of the __________(图表主题). The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点). This means that __________,(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that ___________(图表细节一). After v-ing_________(细节一中的第一个变化), the ____ (紧跟着的变化:幅度+时间). The figures also tells us that______________________(图表细节二). (数据位置，如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因). / It is high time that we should _________ (发出倡议)模板三：利弊型作文Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_______(讨论话题). For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一). For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when _________________(优点二).But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to___________(缺点). For instance, it can bring __________to _____________(举例说明). In addition, many people find it ______

一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分： How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 结尾部分： With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Please come on time and don’t be late. 结束语部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope you’ll have a nice time here. That’s all. Thank you. 三、议论文模板 1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入： 第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... （导入话题） Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧） 正文： 第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点） Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由) 第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. （反方观点） Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由) 结论： 第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（个人观点） オ 2.“A或者B”类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段： Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages. 正文： 第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因) 第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势) 结论： 第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ 3.观点论述类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题 As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对） The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下） 正文： 第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由) 结论： 第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... （照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构） 4."How to"类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题 正文： 第2段： Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法) 结论： 第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法) 四、图表作文写作模板 The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明). We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化， the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议). 五、图画类写作模板：1.开头 Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture... 2.衔接句 As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3.结尾句 In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

作文在英语考试中占有很重要的一个分值，很多考生英语基础不好，作文写不出来。我整理了一些成人高考的英语作文范文，大家可以背一下，再掌握一些万用的开头结尾模板，写出一篇作文不是难事。

一、根据提示写一份举行隔周一次的英语晚会(every-other-week Enlish evening) 的书面通知。

提示：1.时间：11月24日，周六晚上7点。2.地点：2号教学楼的报告厅(lecture room)。3.内容：歌曲，朗诵(recitation),舞蹈，话剧等，还有美籍教师演讲。4.目的：提高学生英语听说能力。5.报名地点：办公室203室，学生会(Students’ Union).

注意：1.要点不得遗漏 2.符合书面通知的格式 3.词数为 100 左右。

NOTICE

In order to improve the students ’ listening and speaking ability, the every-other week English evening is to be held in the lecture room, No.2 Teaching Building , at 7:00 p.m. this Saturday, November 24th. Program includes songs, recitation, dances, plays and so on. And our English teacher from America is going to make a short speech about English study. Everyone is welcome . Those who would like to take part in it , please sign your names at the Students’ Union, Room 203,Office Building .

Students’ Union

二、假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1. 表示歉意; 2. 解释原因; 3. 另约时间。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened .

Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family . You know , we haven't seen each other for nearly a year .

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .Once again ,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused .

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

三、假设你将参加某英文杂志开展的一次征文活动，内容要求你在电视，手机和网络三者中，放弃其中的一个并陈述理由。请你以“which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?” 为题，写一篇短文。

Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?

We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used . It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .

However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there're too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .

As for cells and the web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .

开头语句：

1.There are many different opinions among people as a ...,some people suggest that...

关于......人们有不同的观点。一些人认为......

2.Today... which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First,...Second,...what makes things worse is that...

现在，... 它们给我们的生活带来了许多危害。首先...其次...最糟糕的是...

3.As far as ... is concerned 就...而言

4.It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地说...

5.It has to be noticed that...必须注意到...

6.It’s generally recognized that... 普遍认为...

7.Nothing is more important than the fact that...没有什么比...更重要

8.There’s no denying the fact that...不可否认...

9.As the proverb says 正如谚语所说

10.What’s far more important is that...更重要的是...

结尾语句：

1.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此，我们有理由相信...

2.Therefore, in my opinion,it’s more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是...

3.All things considered 总而言之

4.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说...

5.From what had been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...通过以上结论，我们可以得出以下结论...

6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...通过数据我们得到的结论是...

7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论...

8. From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来...如果...也许更好